I liked this very much. It has just the  right amount of angst. And I think justice was served fairly. Great story.

Thank you!

That was a great read :)

Keep up the excellent work x

Ah....very well done!  I feel bad for Inuyasha and Sango, but the moral of this fic is the important thing here.  Congrats!  This fic is wonderful.  I look forward to reading more of your works.  Great job!

Awesome to the max! I love every moment of it. I didnt expect that out of Kikyou. You are an amazing writer!

I liked that Kikyo had her revenge on Inuyasha for betraying her and Kagome, and I think she really hit where it hurt. I do think Sango and Inuyasha should have had the decency to explain and say sorry to Kagome, but I think Inuyasha's crime was greater then Sango's, and Inuyasha could still have children - The Inu no Taisho, Sesshoumaru's mother and Izayoi being a case where this ocurred. I had worried about Kohaku, but I liked that you managed to use him as a possible way for us to find out what happened to Inuyasha and Sango while assuring us that he survived. Miroku deserved to find someone, and while I will admit that I have never read him paired up with Ayame before, it works in a strange way. You tied this story up nicely, I think - gave us some info about what happened to the characters, but left more then enough room for imagination. Well done! ^-^

Poor Miroku! I loved the interaction between him and Shippo in this chapter, and the silent conversations Kagome and Sesshoumaru had were sweet. The Inutachi's response to finding out Kagome was alive and mated to Sesshoumaru were great - very IC, in my opinion. Sango and Inuyasha have yet to try and give a proper apology, and although they have shown remorse, I think agome is completely justified in her response. It's also good that Kagome reacts like a normal person, and not a Purity-Sue who forgives and forgets everything, and while she doesn't seem to hate them, she doesn't like them or trust them anymore. Well written!

Oooh, interesting idea! Usually Kagome stumbles across Inuyasha and Kikyo, so adding in Sango to the mix deepenns the betrayal! Miroku and Shippo were wrong to keep it from her, but I don't think their reasons were quite as bad as Kagome believed... Still, and interesting take on the "Kagome catches Inuyasha with Kikyo (or, in this case, Sango), and runs off heartbroken, where Sesshoumaru finds her" story, you actually managed to make it interesting and unique!

What an acceptable answer, for Kikyo to strike back the way she did.  Does seem very fitting.  Well done!

Wonderful! Inuyasha and Sango deserved the punishment they got! and Miroku and Ayame?? WOW I soo would have loeved to see some interaction with the two! all in all I loved this fic :D Great Job Amber!

OH!!! i really loved this story! i wish there was more to read lol! good job

Well, I DO agree with your choice and the curse. Everything is in a full circle. We reap what we sow and like I said before, Kikyou was the one who lost the most so I can see her doing something like that.

Hi,

I love so much your stories especialy fuyu (all of them0 you made a very good stories that made me wanted you to write for another favorite manga. Anyway I will waiting your stories especially if Inuyasha been bashing in it like in a winter wish.

Thank-you for giving us such a fast update!

Good for Miroku and Ayame!  

The fact that Inuyasha thought Kagome would be angry that Sesshoumaru had been interested in her for a long time was too funny... while I was reading, I was thinking, "and, how is that a bad thing?"  I see Kagome was thinking the same thing!

And yes, it is your story, you should write it the way you like... if someone doesn't like it, there is a lot of other fanfic that they can read. Thanks for posting your story so that we can enjoy it.

What can I say except AWESOME!  InuAngel said it all...my sentiments exactly. :)

Oh...my...goodness!

I LOVED THIS! Kikyo's revenge was just perfect HA! Take that Sango and Inuyasha you got your just deserts! This was a wonderful story and it was updated really quickly too for the chapters being as long as they were.

Congrats Kanna on yet ANOTHER awsome fic =3!

Bravo!  Loved your story and I commend you for writing your story the way you wanted.  It really gets on my nerves when a writer changes his or her story to please their fans.  If they were true fans in the first place they would respect your vision and not tell you how to write your story.  The too when a writer changes their story to satisify their fans or readers it is no longer the writers story.  I wanted to commend you on that.  I really do love the ending, no matter how sad it was, but there are conseqences for everything you do good or bad.

I liked every thing about your story, I have nothing bad to say at all.  I don't flame it's a waste of time and just plain rude and redicilous, there is a way to say you don't like something in a decent manner and not be hurtful.  I think that's why most people flame is to hurt the writers feeelings.  Anyway, your story plot and line is unique and kept me wanting more!  The ending surprised me, well not the Kilyou's revenge part, which by the way was an awesome idea!  I figured what she had done to Sango when her soul went into her body before returning to Kagomes, it's the epilogue, I was hoping that Inu and Sango would adopt hanyou and lost children having  learn their lesson, but I guess they remained selfish and unhappy.  I also thought that Sango dispite being mated would leave Inu or he her, or he would find someone to carry his child dispite Sango.  The possible outcomes!  I liked yours!!  I always say, "Karma is a bitch, what you do to someone else may come back and bite you in the ass and sometimes ten times harder!" 

I commend you for being brave and a true writer and write YOUR stoy dispite what others say.  I'm an artist I sculpt, paint, print, ink and draw and I would probably tell some one to kiss off if they told me to change a piece to suite the audience, The audience can leave if they are offended, people can stop reading if they are offended I'm sure you have more than enough fans besides I have the feeling that you would write fans or no fans! I will be readng more of your wonderful work, keep it up!! It's refreshing to find something unique.  Oh, I'm gald she forgave Shippou that had me worried, he's just a kid and he had to follow the majority of the adults involved, Kagome was right when she was talking to Miroku, when she told him that it wasn't his lie to tell, it was theirs.  Sometimes we get mad at the wrong people, but I understood the trust issue she had with him.  Again excellent story!!!  Oh oh before I go, I also, liked that you paired Rin up with another inu instead of Shippou, not that I don't like the two of them together they are so cute, it was a great change to read and Shippou finding a kitsume to mate, Oh I think Ayame and Miroku make a cute and perfect couple, a couple you don't see that much in fanfiction!  Awesome!  Unitl I read again Write on!

Much Love

InuAngel

I absolutely love every single one of your stories. You have a real gift with writing and I hope you continue. This story flowed perfectly from beginning to end. I almost wish you hadn't stopped because it was so fun to read. Also, side note, if you ever decide to publish a story I would totally be first in line to buy it.

I really liked it. :)

Nice plot, nicely written, great over all.

I enjoyed reading it and what you said at the end about 'if you don't like, don't read it' thing had a great point.

Anyway, you should write more stories for this one was really great. :)

Good luck and don't let anyone tell you it was a badly written story. :)

~KitKat

Excellent!  Awesome!  I loved everything about this story, and I did not find Kikyo's curse overly harsh.  As ye sow, so shall ye reap.  Not a popular idea these days, but the grain of truth when it comes to the balance scales of justice.