This was good but confusing at first.When you said you were choosing B with no lemon in it but then as I read I realized that even though it mentioned sex it was not described in any detail as a lemon or lime usually is.
This was really good but I'd like to read the A version also.
This was awesome. I loved the plot and the ending.
wickedone43 (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Jul 2010
Wonderful!!! I love this fic! Congrats my dear!! This is just simply awesome! Please continue your endeavors at writing. It gives those of us with no life something to look forward to in this dreary life of ours. Many thanks!
swift death (Chapter 1) - Tue 22 Jun 2010
pretty good story, it was good enough to leave a review, so here it is. :)
Amy (Chapter 1) - Sat 19 Jun 2010
WAY TO GO! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
love you so much (Chapter 1) - Mon 14 Jun 2010
^_^b
OMG!!!! That was wonderful!!!!! I couldn't dtop reading and kami I wish it could have been longer!!! AWESOME JOB!!!! Ja Ne
raRr! I'm glad your well that was intence! but it still had a bit of lime/lemon in if if you were going for option B, though, raRr thats jsut amazing! - r0o
Serena (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Jun 2010
loved it! i think you should continue this and make it into a story.
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