Reviews for We Dream by dkeysdanie

Ikaru (Chapter 1) - Fri 12 Nov 2010

First off, I would like to say congrats on your first lemon. It was very well done. I also enjoyed the way you ended the story, not only does it tie everything up nicely, but it also leaves the door open for a follow up. Well done!


MoxyMikki (Chapter 1) - Fri 12 Nov 2010

this was lovely in a tragic sort of way. I would have liked to have seen more plot, as I thought you had the base for a really great story line. I'd love to see an expansion on this. Great work and congrats on your first lemon!


Miss Anna (Chapter 1) - Sat 06 Nov 2010

Agreed.
This was especially good even though it was your first lemon, it was very easy to read and flowed nicely with the wording that you used. Hah I would like Sesshoumaru to come and visit me in my dreams sometimes lol...anywho I would really love to see more added onto this! Nice job and I hope that you keep up the good work!

 


Dragoness (Chapter 1) - Sat 06 Nov 2010

Awww, so sweet and yet so sad.  At least they have their dreams but what was up with them waking up and actually smelling each other on their persons.  Maybe they have found a way to break the boundaries of the sleeping world.  I soooo hope you add another to this one.  It was soooo nice.


Hairann (Chapter 1) - Sat 06 Nov 2010

Very nicely done, espeically since it was pretty much your first lemon.  The details you used were beautiful, flowed perfectly and made a very enjoyable read.  Keep up the good work and hope to read more from you in the future.

On a side note, this story is offically the 200th story read and reviewed by the Dokuga Reviewers Guild.  I make a banner for each 100th and if you would like to use it, you can find it here: http://i682.photobucket.com/albums/vv183/Hairann/Dokuga%20Reviewers%20Guild/200th.jpg


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