Excellent story! You write as well as anyone born speaking English and you have the gift of being a storyteller. Good job!

Aside from a few grammar and spelling mistakes, I loved the idea behind this one - turnabout is fair play, after all, and if one can be compared unfavorably... so can the other.  Good job!

Amber

Love it! Never thought of it before as a 'comparison game'. Inuyasha got what he deserved and I found myself cheering, even though Kagome was right at the end---at what cost? Can't wait to see where this goes with Sess...pls update soon!