I honestly wanted to write a separate review for each chapter I read but for some reason the site or my laptop isn't loading the pages properly. Anyway,...

I must say that you, my witty friend, TOTALLY ROCK!!!! This one come straight out of left field and I can bet no one even gave this senario a thought. I'm ususally one who looks at all the angles and I have to admit, on this , I was really off my game because the porn star being youkai never entered my mind. Boy, how I'd love to make excuses as to why I didn't guess this but I'll admit it, YOU ROCK!!

I can understand the fear and uncertainty Sesshoumaru has been going through. Honestly, to me, it made alot of sense. The way you/he explained how he felt made sense but I've got to agree with Kagome on this , he really should have thought to talk to her(and I don't just mean thought, he SHOULD have talked to her). He's been giving off so many different signals that if it wasn't Kagome, the woman would have told him to screw off and left. It's not as if she doesn't know WHO he was in the past and how youkai/inuyoukai react toward those they feel they 'own', for lack of a better word. She lived and journeyed with InuYasha for all that time and he was a perfect example when it came to the possession and dominance thing youkai seem to have. Even Kouga wouldn't give up thinking that Kagome was "his woman" as he put it. Kagome could have helped his uneasiness and his lack of knowledge on mating/marriage. They pretty much have been living and acting married since Kagome and Rin moved in with him. They've been doing things as a family and making decisions together concerning not only Rin but other things as well. As far as the mating part of it, he has already 'proven' he owns her body, mind, and soul hense the dominating factor is achieved but he has to already know and if not Kagome told him, he will never truly 'own' her, she is her own person who chooses when to be dominated. And she has no problem when he wants to play the mad, wild, passionate monkey dance.

I also think maybe Kagome was also right in a way, that they moved to fast to get mated/ married. They'll definitely need time after this happened.   JEN

ps...why is the length of these chapters such a big thing? I happen to LOVE long chapters. Is there a rule not allowing long chapters? I think if you're on a roll and it's getting good, go for it! You're worth having extra long chapters. Just my opinion.

Oh man, I so wondered how you were going to pull that one off, but you did! Amazing again :)

I personally do not mind long chapters or long stories <3

This was great. Kagome should give him hell for this! Sesshoumaru asked for it!

Haha, oh the tangled web he has found himself in...

Cannot wait for the next chapter!!

 OMG your  right  Sesshoumaur is  being  a Idot male :snorts: love it  XD

if  only   guys were not  such......whats the  word I'm looking for  oh  yeah  dince  and  talked about what  they wre feeling  Oh  welll   it  makes  for  such good writeing though  XD

Update  sooon pleaseeee

Oh my God that was soooo good. I'm thinking Kikyou or I don't know something. I couldn't figure out what was going on. I would never have seen that coming. Wow. I can't wait for the conversation that is coming even before the woman comes. And who sent the video in the first place? Is it some demoness that wants him for herself? OOOOOH I can't wait to find out.

Well, I feel bad for Sesshoumaru an so many levels.  HOWEVER, we know how emotionally constipated that demon can be and I feel bad enough that he deserves a bit of a break.  

Yes, Kagome has every right to be angry and in typical Kagome style - EMOTIONAL.  

Oh the ways that this story can go!  So many directions!  I can't wait to see which direction you take it :)

Thank you for your continuous quality writing.  It's always a pleasure to see an update from you in my mail box!

I hope they find out soon who's responsible for the videos. But Sess should first work hard to get Kagome back after their confrontation with the people who framed Kagome. Update soon! :D

I'd find it extremely difficult not to smack Sesshomaru silly, and people think Inuyasha is dense. I mean he's seen how she is in both the past and present and he should know the wonders of the internet. Plus Kikyo and Kagome were supposed to look alike it is plausible for people to share similar features and how do we know that the woman isn't just wearing contacts? Also does this have anything to do with the missing gold I wonder?

Keep up the excellent work.

Man, Sesshoumaru is an idiot. Does he trust her at all? It doesn´t seem so and then he goes and accuses her again that she liked  being looked at by Gary´s friend. Sesshoumaru´s character is really aggravating here. You can´t say anything to him without offending him (he´s worse than a woman) and then he´s an extreme possesive ass. I´m glad that my boyfriend is "normal" in comparison to him.

This relationship´s foundation is seriously in a bad shape and in some parts even lacking.

eheheheheh      I love  you  more and  mor e  with  each updated chapter

i was  like  OMG

then   like  O.....mmmm....GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

then i was  like 0.o

wow  jelous sessho

and the  kissss  w0ot

only amater of time  befor sesshou  feels  like an  idot  kagomes  been set up i know  that ..you know that...and she  knows that  oooooohh  i cant  wait

update  sooon please

Gaahh! *pulls hair out* the suspense! Moar plz thx

Woe, that was INTENSE!! Sesshoumaru is 110 percent male. I believe this was better than any love scene ever written. FANTASTIC!  

Sesshoumaru is an ass. I am glad Rin said everything she did, he deserved that and more. Sesshoumaru admitted that he was rethinking mating Kagome before the internet, I think if I were Kagome, he would have to work his ass off to get me. Great chapter, I like the way you gave Rin strength.

Alright!! Here I am clapping my hands and applauding an older and more mature Kagome, even though she just wants to slap him senseless for not trusting in her! I know how hard that was for Kagome but if she waled and screamed at him, he would be listening to her heart and breathing, her body language as well as her words. He would have thought she was guilty because of her those reactions and turned and left. Him being an InuYoukai makes him a hard person to lie to and how she handled herself was excellent.

I was so impressed with all the facts she come up with so quickly in her defense. How many of you can't say that when threatened your memory turns off and you don't know what to say rationally and all that comes out is the hurtful emotions? And then there's poor young Rin. That little girl has had alot to handle in her young life and I've got to give Kagome credit, their life together has been rough but Rin has turned out to be one intelligent, respectful and loving child. Let no one, even her Lord Sesshoumaru,  say or do anything to hurt her mom because Rin will be right there defending the only person who has literally given up their life to love and provide a decent life for her. She is every parent's dream.

I cried when Rin's tantrum ended and she hugged Sesshoumaru, not only was she sorry for her hurtful words but she said she loved him and then he, in turn, said he loved her too. For the first time in their lives together Rin and Sesshoumaru spoke the words, I love you...beautiful!!!

Now I'm all geared up for the following chapters and hey, I happened to ADORE each and every time one of your fics goes into overtime. Each time you write that this will just be a short fic...I grin and say, "we'll see, Lady O, we'll see."  JEN

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OMGGGGGGGGGGG


poor  rin  and Kagome  its not her  fault though  i have a feeling it is gary  and  his  friends

  OOOH  :hugsLLl update sooon     i'm on pins and needles

Eghads those videos are trouble? how were they made? craaazy stuff great update!

Oh my this chapter had me in tears. I knew that Rin was hurt but like Kagome said it went so deep. I never thought that she would talk to Sessy that way though. Man that was really surprising. But she is getting older so I can see her doing that now. I cant wait for Kagome and Sesshoumaru find the person that put out those videos. I'm thinking that if was some of Gary's people I mean if Gary was smart enough to install cameras in thier home without her knowing then I can only imagine what his friends are capable of. Sessy is gonna be pissed when he finds out though but I know that everything is gonna work out cuz Kagome definately deserves it.

Love the story it is definately keeping me on the edge of my seat. Cant wait for the next update.

This poor family-to-be has so many difficulties to deal with.  Glad that they worked some of the issues out, but I can't wait to see who framed Kagome!  

Great job!

Oh geez, what a sticky situation. I almost cried over all that! I hope they can resolve this issue quickly.