This was incredibly cute, and an enjoyment to read. It was also well written, my only suggestion would be to add a few more details to the ending because it seemed a little rushed. Very well done!
Hairann (Chapter 1) - Wed 27 Oct 2010
Very cute story. I really enjoyed reading it. Though I would recommend adding a bit more details, especially toward the end. Though I have to say 'December blue' is the best discription of her eyes I have ever heard.
Dragoness (Chapter 1) - Wed 27 Oct 2010
LOL. If only it were that simple. I loved this it was sooo cute. I especially love how she made her second wish more detailed. Great job.
Very nice and very sweet, I love that you made Sesshoumaru sortof shy! Winter is my favorite season and I have to say that in this story you made a perfect winter day! I would like to see more/read more from you in the future! Keep up the good work!
aw, expand! I loved this! I'm wondering why Kagome doesn't think she'll have a valentine. You describe her as a lovely person, but never fully explained where you were going with your original thoughts... One more reason to expand! hint hint wink wink! I hope to see more, you've got an amazing story here!
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