This was very enjoyable to read, and other than a few minor grammar and punctuations issues, this was pretty well written. The only thing that had me a little confused was the order you put some of the events in. Other than that well done and keep up the good work!

Very interesting one-shot.  I enjoyed it from beginning to end, but feel it could use just a bit of work.  A few parts seem to be a bit rushed to me and I think slowing down the story a bit would help your story to flow better.  Other than that, and a few missing puncutation and such, it was enjoyable read.

Sad but sweet.  What a wonderful story and the song fit so well with it (Only one of my favorites).  This story flowed very well and was descriptive.  I loved it.  I find myself wishing "hint, hint" ^_^ for a chapter story to follow in which they both miraculously come back to life and have a chance at that relationship they never got to.  But I'm a sucker for happy endings so don't mind me.  I like the thought of them meeting up again in the afterlife. Great job.

That was very good even though the ending was sad, I loved it! I like how you gave Kagome more of a backbone and I like how you made Sesshoumaru and Kagome fit each other so perfectly. Heh it also was a good thing to see a smart Inuyasha! Your choice of song to base the story off of was a good pick! I would like to read more of your stuff in the future so keep up the good job!

so sad! *sniffle* I thought it was sad when I read that all the kids were kids, but that ending completely choked me up. I really liked the concept of Kagome and Sesshomaru being alpha, but I would have liked to have read your interpretation of WHY Kagome was alpha. I always enjoy knowing the authors motives for what they portray in their stories. Thank you for the wonderful read!