Oh I love this story. Hehehe Sesshomaru as the Phantom is great. Keep up the great work. I lok forward to your next chapter with eager anticipation.

An interesting take on the Phantom story.  There were some small spelling and grammar mistakes.  If I didn't already know the basic phantom plot I would have been very confused.  The first chapter doesn't really mention Kagome at all and it threw me off at first when all of a sudden we jump into her performance.  For me it was too quick, and needed a bit more lengthy transition from one chapter to the next.  I think if Kagome was introduced in the first chapter I would have been able to follow it better.  Overall I think it's a good story with a lot of potential.

interesting twist to PotO can't wait to read more

This was very well done, Im interested to see how you are going to cast the rest of the characters. My memory is kind of sketchy when it comes to this tale, but I do remember the basics of it and I am truly curious to see how you are going to weave this classic tale in such a way as to make it your own. If there were any errors, they were easily missed because of how well this was written, I'll be looking foreward to your next update.

I really like the first chapter! I think its very well written. I couldn't find any errors, so your doing great in my opinion. I hope to see a new chapter soon!

A very classic tale. I think your 1st chapter does it justice. I saw no errors, but to be honest your writing flows so well I probably would have passed right by them. Very nice, can't wait to read more.

Very interesting beginning and as a huge fan of Pantom, I can not wait to see where you take it.  The first chapter flowed rather nicely and I didn't notice any errors.  Good job with the details as well.

This is pretty interesting. Is Sessy the ghost? Is Inuyasha going to be Rhaoul with Kagome as Christine? If that is the case, than are you still going to have Inuyasha and Kagome end up together? Are you going to have Naraku as the male lead opera singer, Piangi? I can imagine many different things that you can do with this story... Keep up the good work.

It's a nice beginning for a classic tale. It is a very hard piece to translate into the InuYasha world and I give you props for attempting it. You did a pretty decent job of the details and the descriptions of some of the major players but there are significant grammar and sentence structure issues, which interrupts the general flow of the piece. Seeing as there is still a ton more story to tell, I would suggest a couple things : create and write from an outline of the key points of the classic story, this will be easier than an original work, since you already have the whole thing written for you but the most important events and key people should be "rough draft" before you actually write the first word, that way you don't leave anything out. Remember not everyone has actually seen or read Phantom of the Opera in any of it's incarnations. Also, you might want to look into getting a beta to help with the grammar and spelling - an extra pair of eyes before publishing is always a great idea. Good luck and keep it up.