I enjoyed this even though it was so sad. I was hoping that Sesshomaru would do something heroic for her in the end...but in it's own way it ended good, just the romantic in me wanted the "happy ending" but that is not always possible. Anyways, I think you did a really good job on it, took your time to develop the story and set the characters up which made me more attached to them all. The only thing I would have liked to know was what happened to everyone else after it was over..did she get her wish? Other than that...Great job!