Hello Author. I loved each and every snipits! The last one, the ending, was wonderful. I love your view and the build up of their relationship, and that not always words but actions that speak more than words can. I loved it loved it loved it! Thank you for your work. Take care. <3 <3 <3 
      
Loveyaa (Chapter 1) -  Sun 27 Sep 2015 
That was...sweet. In such a simplistic manner too. Quite the little story. Thanks! 
      
Ruriame (Chapter 1) -  Sun 30 May 2010 
The format of this was really interesting but I think it added to the way the whole thing unfolded. It had a poetic feel to it because a lto of the segments were short and to the point but still descriptive. It was a really nice and enjoyable read :) 
      
Hesunohana (Chapter 1) - Tue 20 Apr 2010 
beautiful ! 
      
Hm. I like it! Good job. 
      
This is absolutely wonderful...so touching. Great job! I can't wait to read more of your stuff! 
      
Tsuki (Chapter 1) -  Fri 02 Apr 2010 
Wow! That was so amazing :D 
      
Miss.Undo (Chapter 1) - Fri 02 Apr 2010 
are you going to make this a one shot? 
      
BlueHeavensAngel (Chapter 1) - Fri 02 Apr 2010 
Wow.  I really liked this.  It was interesting how you switched back and forth like that.  Great job! 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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