wow this is one of the greatest stories i have read keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^

I must say I was glued till my screen till the end. This was exceptionally done, and a very enjoyable read. The plot did seem a bit rushed in places, and there were a few spelling and grammar issues, but that is nothing getting the help of a beta, or even going though and checking it over again yourself won't fix. I also noticed that a couple of your AN's seemed a little long, remember that Dokuga only allows 300 words per chapter to be dedicated to an AN. Im not complaining mind you, a couple of your notes cleared up some of my lingering questions, but I would hate to see your story be penalized because of something like that. I have faved this story and am looking foreward to your next update:D

This is an excellent beginning to what I'm sure can become a fascinating story.  There were some grammar and spelling mistakes though.  A beta could help there.  Also it felt just a bit rushed.  Almost jumping from one thing to the next.  Slow down and and fully develop your plot. You need to transition at a more leisurely pace from one scene to the next and the story will flow better.  I really hope you will continue this story it has one of the most interesting plots I've read.

This is a very interesting premise, and I think that your writing style is very good as well. I was a little confused at one point, but I think that that is entirely to blame on the hour, not on the story. Keep up the good work. I am very interested to see who the sword was made by, why it was left there for her to find, and what Sesshoumaru has in store for her. I think that this is a great story. There were really no spelling or grammatical errors that I noticed either. Kudos to you!

Very interesting.  Who would have thought that Kagome would be capable of succumbing to something like that.  Who would have created such a blade?  I love your writing.  Your words flow nicely and the picture is clear in my mind.  A couple of spelling errors, but slips of the fingers on the keys.  Something that all us authors are guilty of.  What is Kagome going to do?  What is Sesshoumaru going to do?

It's almost as if she becomes a completely different person when she uses the sword. It certainly has interesting powers. There were a couple of spelling errors that came up and the story did jump around a little, a little paragraph rephrasing would clean that up that I am most definitely curious as to what's up with Kags, the possessed sword and our fav Sess. Keep writing.

Interesting beginning.  Amazing job on details, the story flows rather well, though it does seem a bit rushed in places.  A few grammar issues such as 'to instead of too', and I noticed your dialog usually didn't have any puncuation at the end.  I hope you continue this :).