I like your story. It has a very interesting premise. However, I would suggest getting someone to beta for you. It's a very choppy read and there are typos and grammatical mistakes. It's a good story! Keep going!
I like this story. Please continue writing.
chey (Chapter 2) - Sun 28 Mar 2010
more please. pretty please? with cherries on top?
Sokai (Chapter 1) - Sun 28 Mar 2010
I like it. keep writting
Ooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!! please update soon
Ooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!! please update soon
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