| Damn, I feel pretty sorry for Kagome here. While it's obvious Sesshomaru cares about her, it's also obvious that he doesn't care about her opinions. Which in Kagome speak is a 'doesn't respect me'. She had it better in the future but being born in the feudal era to a wealthy family is pretty much a prison sentence, even if it's made of gold. And Hakudoushi? Wow. Loved him as an evil demon kid but as an obsessive stalker? *shudder* Also kind of refreshing that it isn't Naraku. Have to admit, halfway through chapter one I was imagining Kagome being offered freedom and she takes it giving Sesshomaru a wild goose chase around the ancient world. But then the tittle of the story wouldn't fit haha    
 
Aki (Chapter 1) - Mon 03 May 2010 | You failed to mention you yourself had awesome fictions. xD Good job and update soon.    
 
Anonymous (Chapter 2) - Sat 24 Apr 2010 | oh..oops, just finished reading..it's Haku - one more evil bishie!!!!    
 
Anonymous (Chapter 2) - Sat 24 Apr 2010 | Isn't it high time you updated? I love the tension in the second chapter....is the kidnapper Hojo-turned Naraku? Cuz Kags didn't recognize him at first....did she?    
 
Angel (Chapter 2) - Thu 01 Apr 2010 | really good...i love the cliffhanger...cant wait to read next chapter please update soon    
 | That give me shivers!    
 | wow... are you actually gonna ask Kagome to shoose the lesser of two evils in this story? A mean and possessive husband who doesnt care for more than his image or an evil villian? I like the writing and I like the story since so far. I look forward to next chapter which ever way you take the story.    
 | Ooooooh, Wicked. I love the beginning to this story. I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm glad you put this out. Woohoo!    
 | Ooooooooh awesome beginning! I'm intrigued, what happens next? <mute>  <3    
       
 
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