Awww, that was so sweet! It's really been a joy :) Thanks for sharing!

Here, I think you could have use'd with some more description between the dialogue. It seemed a bit rushed because the characters weren't described. On to chapter 8!

Should be yakusa, not yukuza. Also, I think you might have gotten a bit carried away with the caps lock this chapter. It makes it seem more significant when only really, really important things (like words or short phrases) are in all caps. Usually, just an exclamation point is enough, or you could use the occasional italic :)

Maiyumi should be Ayumi. (At least, I think it should. That seems to be the general consensus in fics and on the Inuyasha Wiki.) Loving it so far :)

Hey! Just started reading your fic, and it looks interesting so far :) Just wanted to point out that when you said something like "that bastard (referring to Inu Taisho)" it was a bit disruptive to have the A/N there in the text. You could just say "that bastard Taisho" and it'd be understandable, and flow more smoothly. Also, when you said, "to tell you the truth," it was a break of the fourth wall. That may have been intentional, I don't know, but I just thought it'd sound better without you - "to tell the truth" - that way you wouldn't be reminding the reader that he/she is, in fact, a reader and not a part of the story world. Chapter 2, here I come!

please continue the story.poor kagome

this is a very good, wonderful, great story, which i love and like very much since i first started reading the story, your a very great wonderful good author who wrote this very great wonderful good story.

update please, this stiry is still awesome.

>:l stupid Ayame! *kicks her*

yay i'm so happy you updated while i could still remember what this story is about.please continue teh story soon.

GREAT JOB KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

well good luck with that and when you do update i'll totally be reading it!!!!

awesome,thank you for updating and please do so again

oi how confusing for him :3

:3 g0od job! i cant wait for more!

for some reason i wasnt getting my update notices! wow, i like this, =x p0or kagome!

I'm liking it so far. Keep up the good work.

Very good job. Now you've got my heart going. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Much, much better.

I'm loving where this is going. Keep it up!