Reviews for Maybe by Ashley

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Christina (Chapter 6) - Fri 26 Jul 2013

Such a cute and wonderful story. 


lara (Chapter 6) - Sun 24 Apr 2011

I don't know how I just found this story.I can't believe I missed it. It was great & I read it all at once. I'll admit I was upset that he let Abi suck him off but, what wife with a beautiful,powerful husband willingly hires a secretary for him that she knows desires him,I'm just glad he killed her? If that wasn't a stupid move on Kagome's part ,I don't know what is.In retrospect,when Sessh got upset over Kagome over reacting,she should of asked him what he'd of done if it was the other way around & just as he told Kagome something as meaningful as she was pregnant but, something meaningful that they'd been working towards but (like only she could have a baby,instead something that could only come from him) it could only come from him & she said turned around & told him,well I had to kill my male secretary & when he asked why....how would he react after hearing well,he seduced me & ...even he couldn't lie that upon hearing those words he wouldn't have just yelled,he'd have tried to kill her before she finished ,heck he'd probably have killed her if he did listen & she told him is wasn't serious but I did let him go down on me for a few minutes...(couldn't you see him,eyes going red,just the thought of a male touching his wife inimately while she allowed it,even if it was only for a minute) Doing something like that is just asking for trouble. Keeping a good relationship is hard enough,foolish choices like that, can only make the possibility of problems stronger. I'm glad it worked out .


joyouki (Chapter 4) - Sun 17 Apr 2011

omg the a**hole...this stinks what he did


joyouki (Chapter 3) - Sun 17 Apr 2011

hell yes are u crazy..more more more...now i sound like kagome lol


joyouki (Chapter 2) - Sun 17 Apr 2011

the chicken shit waiting on her to fall asleep to say i love u...


joyouki (Chapter 1) - Sun 17 Apr 2011

hot damn another flippen fantastic story...you got talent


Kamille (Chapter 6) - Fri 05 Nov 2010

OMG!!!! I love this fic!!!! I say write more lol LOVE IT!!!!


Dragoness (Chapter 6) - Thu 27 May 2010

Sooooo Cute. I like that he was unsure for most of the beginnning chapters.  It was more realistic, unfortunately thats life. It is rare when we don't question our choices many times over. It was totally believable and completely captivating as well as erotic. Can't wait to read your next story.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 6) - Mon 24 May 2010

i love this ficcy ^_^


daapatemysoul (Chapter 6) - Mon 24 May 2010

I enjoyed your story. I was surprised by the angsty parts of it, but it all came together well. I confess to not loving it as much as the other one you're writing, but hey, I adore that. :) And yeah, it sounds like this person is behaving in a very immature manner and I'm shocked you haven't said anything to the admins. I bet at the very least they could delete all her reviews.


Eve Nighte (Chapter 6) - Sun 23 May 2010

I would love to see more! A chapter on Sesshomaru's now fixated life with four (or more) children and his mate would be absolutely awesome. I wonder how Sesshomaru would react to find his little Mizuki dating? 'Maybe' he'll be happy or 'maybe' he'll be angry lol


Rowdys girl (Chapter 6) - Sun 23 May 2010

Ashley, welcome back! I was sure we wouldn't hear from you for weeks. I was very happy to see you were updating.

Now, onto the next thing: this Sara chick. Since when do you pay any attention to reviews that aren't from ME????? Especially rude, off the point reviews from irrelevant reviewers who are clueless and NOT ME????? *shakes head* It is so hard to be the center of the universe!

I read this in one go and I thought it was very good. I also feel that you have reached the end of it. There really is no more to add. I thought your characters were strong and believable. Her behavior while she was trying to get pregnant was actually pretty standard for a woman on hormones. Nope, you did a good job of this and anyone who thinks otherwise is an...no, I'm trying to be civilized here and to refere to someone so lacking in wit and decernment as an idiot would hardly be diplomatic, regardless of how true the statement.


demonvixen2002 (Chapter 6) - Sun 23 May 2010

I really enjoyed your stories as for SARA " Dont read it if you dont like it"!!!!!!!!! Also  the other stories that you write I very much enjoyed your stories keep the writing up and dont let like SARA get to u !!! some people dont know a good story when they read one.  BIG FAN -MG


kori (Chapter 6) - Sun 23 May 2010

Hunny, I loved it, it was great, I think you have done a great job.  Ignore Sara, honestly it sounds like someone that knows you personally and might be out to make you angry on purpose. like others have said if you don't like it don't read it. good luck and i look forward to reading more.


FairQueen (Chapter 6) - Sun 23 May 2010

first loved the story. i was in the mood for smut and u sure gave it good and a happy ending too :) ty    oh and i was reading the review of Sara and i have this to say---------- the rating on a story r there for a reason-------if u want happy read humor, if u want tame read the k levels  but if u want smut well MA is the best   :)

 


Sesshoumaru'sPriestess (Chapter 5) - Sun 02 May 2010

nooooooooooooooooo!! this needs an ending!!!!!


sara (Chapter 5) - Sat 24 Apr 2010

Like your last title this fic was not worth to read. Your characters change their mood like I my panties. Everything was based on sex and Sesshoumaru acts as if he is a constantly horny King. Him cheating on her seems O.K because Kagome is such a bitch? One moment he can´t see her as his mate but when she´s spreading her tighs again he wants her as his mate? Damn, how old are you?


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 5) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

awe i like this a lot!


beckyducky (Chapter 4) - Mon 19 Apr 2010

Dear ashley,

 

I love this story!  I think you have a great way of painting a picture with minimal words!  The fic is artfully done!!  (lots of exclamation points, no?) 

 

haha~~ ^__^  Update soon!!

 

ducky out!

 

ps:  I like how you used abi-hime.  Truthfully, the yura/kagura/kikyo whores are overused in fics so...  congrats on the originality!! (And sessh killing her was great!  wow that sounds bloodthirsty but what i mean to say is that normally, he would just dismiss her.  In many au fics, sessh never actually kills the girl.  So I like how yours is very much different than other au fics!! Great job!)


TruGemini (Chapter 4) - Fri 16 Apr 2010

Isee a biiiiiiiigggg problem coming their way. Somehow she is going to find out, and he is going to be in the doghouse for real. I hope he is ready.


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