Hey, Minerva-one!

This is an amazing story. I love the idea, the concept. It's sad, but happy. The chapter, I found, kinda jumped scenes a little too often, but it was amazing. I think the only way you could have improved it was by adding a little detail. Not necessarily to material objects, but overall. Is it going to stay as a oneshot, or develop into something more?

~ Incomprehensible

Oh my god! What a wonderful story! I loved it. I have tears in my eyes right now and i think i will let them sit there for a minute while i let your story sink in. THat was beautiful and sad i loved it wonderful job!

I really love the concept of this story. The chapter itself was a little jumpy (from one place to another) but you did make it work, which is not an easy thing to do. I'm intrigued - i think I may stick around to see what happens. Its a promising plot line and idea, and as another author, I only warn you of one thing: to make a story like this work you must focus on Sesshomaru's characterizations. Don't make him too out of character, people will leave.

But, regardless, I'm curious to see what happens! Can't wait for the next update!

I really enjoyed that!

Very interesting one-shot.  Reminds me a bit of a story I'm working on the outline for at the moment.  Might have been better if it was a bit longer, but I enjoyed it none the less.  Nice job.