Quite an adorable oneshot :) Thanks for the time and effort you put into writing and posting it!
This was absolutely adorable, and I really enjoy the idea of what life would be like for Inu and Sess if they did not have the animosity between them. I also am glad that you got Valentine's Day in Japan correctly. I live in Japan and always got candy for the office on Valentines, and I always had to specify to all the teachers that the candy from me was for ALL of the teachers, not just the males.
I know this was written over two years ago now, but I would be very curious about how Sess would reciprocate on White Day. I was so surprised my first White Day in Japan when I came to school to find my desk covered in little gifts. I can just imagine little Inu badgering Sess about a human holiday he needed to observe for the human who is courting him!
Happy writing either way! I look forward to what comes next in your othe stories!
Wanda (Chapter 1) - Fri 10 Feb 2012
|I enjoyed the idea of a young InuYasha and Sesshomaru acting in this manner.
I was also happy that their father and InuYasha's mother were alive and
that they were a family.
All in all this was a cute and enjoyable story that changed them but kept
the persona we expected.
(Chapter 1) - Fri 10 Feb 2012
Oh my that was just ADORABLE! I loved this... and I kinda wish there was a sequel... but oh well. Good story and I SO wish you made it slightly longer... just to see what would happen in their relationship...
PS: Man... I didn't think I knew I used so many (...) in this comment... !
Jaye (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Feb 2012
Love this so much! "Not spicy, Sess! I checked!" best line ever.
I don't suppose there will be a continuation? Please please pweddy pwease wid sugawr on topsies?
LOL! Cute. XD
Katlyn (Chapter 1) - Fri 03 Feb 2012
that was awesome! A very nice and unique take on how they could come together in the modern times in which his family is alive, and inuyasha is a little kid! :D Not an annoyance either, which is rare. I really loved the roll Inu played in getting them together, his simple logic is best in these cases XD
I also loved how you took a cliche and made it beautiful and exciting again. Well done! I really look forward to more!
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