Quite an adorable oneshot :) Thanks for the time and effort you put into writing and posting it!
This was absolutely adorable, and I really enjoy the idea of what life would be like for Inu and Sess if they did not have the animosity between them. I also am glad that you got Valentine's Day in Japan correctly. I live in Japan and always got candy for the office on Valentines, and I always had to specify to all the teachers that the candy from me was for ALL of the teachers, not just the males.
I know this was written over two years ago now, but I would be very curious about how Sess would reciprocate on White Day. I was so surprised my first White Day in Japan when I came to school to find my desk covered in little gifts. I can just imagine little Inu badgering Sess about a human holiday he needed to observe for the human who is courting him!
Happy writing either way! I look forward to what comes next in your othe stories!
Wanda (Chapter 1) - Fri 10 Feb 2012
|I enjoyed the idea of a young InuYasha and Sesshomaru acting in this manner.
I was also happy that their father and InuYasha's mother were alive and
that they were a family.
All in all this was a cute and enjoyable story that changed them but kept
the persona we expected.
(Chapter 1) - Fri 10 Feb 2012
Oh my that was just ADORABLE! I loved this... and I kinda wish there was a sequel... but oh well. Good story and I SO wish you made it slightly longer... just to see what would happen in their relationship...
PS: Man... I didn't think I knew I used so many (...) in this comment... !
Jaye (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Feb 2012
Love this so much! "Not spicy, Sess! I checked!" best line ever.
I don't suppose there will be a continuation? Please please pweddy pwease wid sugawr on topsies?
LOL! Cute. XD
Katlyn (Chapter 1) - Fri 03 Feb 2012
that was awesome! A very nice and unique take on how they could come together in the modern times in which his family is alive, and inuyasha is a little kid! :D Not an annoyance either, which is rare. I really loved the roll Inu played in getting them together, his simple logic is best in these cases XD
I also loved how you took a cliche and made it beautiful and exciting again. Well done! I really look forward to more!
AWWW! What a cute story! <3
I'll have something to look forward to for Valentines day. XD
tentacrab (Chapter 1) - Wed 01 Feb 2012
awww! this is soooo sweet!!!! I wish there was more!!!``
Ichigo (Chapter 1) - Wed 01 Feb 2012
I loved how you played the story out and hope that you countiue it. Made me smile and laugh at how Kagome got tricked into asking him, and than to just go along with it...i hope to read more whenever it is posted.
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