omg! Sesshoumaru and Kikyou = Mind rape. haha

Well if you do continue the story, I hope that you won't let Kagome accept him that easily (but in my honest opinion, she shouldn't accept him at all) because she should have more self respect.  I mean c'mon! He's been cheating on her since forever. >.< The girl deserves a break.

Nice one though :D Makes me want to hate Sesshoumaru >.<

Oh, that really made me cry :(  I really liked this and I definitely would like you to make this a longer story.

I would love it if you turned this into a short story it would be so interesting please would you Hawk I would totally think that it would be amazing.

i really thought inuyasha was cheating on her until she said sesshoumaru's name.. but this story is so sad! great story, but i did think it was kind of easy for them to die.. at first i thought kagome set a decoy to see how he would react. i can't believe she killed herself! and then sesshoumaru..

The Story does not make sense it is  confusing, it seems like she is talking about Inuyasha one moment and then it's Sesshomaru.  Which is it?   there is no character development, there is no real motive why she does what she does, the same with him.

 I loved it! I must be feeling totally sadistic right now cuz usually I hate when the main characters die. But this time it seems almost fair. The whole time I was thinking "Sesshoumaru you insensitive dickhead! Just drop dead!" And he did! And no wonder Kags killed herself, it must be awful to be someone's fool for so long. Rationally everyone would feel like idiots and like there is no reason to live because they made so much mistakes for so long. So obviously death would seem like the only option. I don't say that it's a right decision but it is something that would be a key for everybody if they were in the same situation. And Sesshoumaru died cuz he was an asshole! He actually deserved it even more than Kagome. Cuz it's either death or living the rest of his life in guilt!

btw I still can't believe that his ex was Kinky-hoe! This kinda mirrors the actual show. It is a wonder that Kagome didn't kill herself with Inuyasha always tellin her how Kikyo is better than her! But that it is only a show for young viewers. So I bet your story is more real, cuz it would probably be like that in real-life. And ofcourse Sessho is much bigger fish than Inuyasha but that ain't the point!

^_^

It was sad, but I don't understand why she'd kill herself.  Why not just live a better life?

To be honest I really like it!Very well written fic!The writing is very emotionally involved and the character development is great.I certainly hope that you continue it!