That was bittersweet and believable.
| Read the sequael to this and loved it, decided to read your other stuff.  I know you haven't updated in a while, but I thought I should let you know I love your writing style. :)    
 
swift death (Chapter 1) - Sat 17 Jul 2010 | pretty good story :)    
 
Lady_Pavarti (Chapter 1) - Thu 21 Jan 2010 | I love your style of writing please continue on with this one shot.    
 | How tasteful! Please do continue it :) I like the beauty of your words. They speak a lot yet are not loud, if you get what I mean.    
       
 
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