Zomg!! Kickass so far! i'm so happy that kagome tried to kill naraku by herself.  I loved how she was the big hero of the day instead of the males of the show (at least until she died).  Yet it was realistic in that kagome didnt just vanquish naraku in one go because she's still untrained.  But anyway, go Kagome!! 

I bet sesshoumaru revives her RIGHT RIGHT RIGHT?!?!?!

Gah! i'm so excited!

Couple of points i want to mention: The transition from memory to real life was pretty smooth and well written.  You're very descriptive.  I think you do spoken dialogue very well. 

Overall, very action-packed chapter!  CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE!!

ducky out.

This is very well-written. I enjoyed reading it. I would definitely like to read more of this and see where you take it. Good job!

Ooh, I love all the angsty goodness. I wonder what is wrong with me to love angst so much lately...

Anyways, this is a great beginning and I cannot wait until you write more! I will definately be keeping an eye out for it! Kudos!

A very good start.  This is well-written and it immediately pulled me into the story.  I really want to see what happens next.  I hope you update soon.

Very compelling.  I look forward to reading more.  Your grammar and punctuation are good, and the story is off to a very good start.

this seems like you have thought things out rather well, a very intriging start i do look forward to how you continue it...having Kags be hated by Inuyasha and having her have to stand on her own, i liked it, but i wonder why Kikyo died for Kags....hmmm....well ill be waiting for your next chapter eagerly!!

Interesting beginning.  Would recomend a bit more discriptions, but great job other than that.  Keep up the good work.

Hairann