Hairann (Chapter 5) - Fri 24 Sep 2010

Nicely done drabbles.  Very cute and easily pull the reader in.  Good job :).


Miss Anna (Chapter 5) - Thu 23 Sep 2010

^_^
You did very well on capturing the title name within the drabble, which is very good.
I hope to see more...heh this is my second time re-reading this and I still can't get enough of it.

Ja Ne


MoxyMikki (Chapter 5) - Thu 23 Sep 2010

I enjoyed the way these progressed. Its not easy to do that seamlessly with drabbles, but you mannaged to pull that off very well! I think my fave was thefirst. That little insight into Sesshomaru was just heart melting. I love how worried he was about Kagome and how much we wanted to protect her. Again, where you managed to get a deep detail expressed in so few words. Often times authors take a long time to get a point across because they want to be thorough, but sometimes the impact is lessened as the effectiveness of word use is lost. I enjoy these drabbles because they are exemplaray of cases where sometimes less is more.


Ikaru (Chapter 5) - Mon 20 Sep 2010

This was a lovey piece, everything was short but it painted the progression of his feelings well. It was truely a joy to read, I'll look foreward to more of your work in the future!


Dragoness (Chapter 5) - Sat 18 Sep 2010

Aaahhh! That was soo cute, I loved it.  It wasn't elaborate just short and sweet.  It showed the progression of his feelings and the realization of what his life should be.  I love that he finally realized how fortunate he was to have the sword he was given and the fact that he finally understands that without people to share it with all the wealth and power in the world means nothing.


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