The story was astonishingly wonderful and hope you made it in to multiple chapters with slow development of romance. However i enjoyed the story nonetheless,! So thank you!

4th time reading this! Wish it was longer. Why do the story that have it all, great content, great writing, great characterization, great dialogue, and great sex, are always so short ???? I so want more of this!

So hot! I've read this before but neglected to leave a review and for that I appologize. Great character writing and delicious lemon!!

I enjoyed this story!

The story is amazing and it had a wonderful ending.

Great! I loved how you wrote it and how smooth was the plot; especially how you changed of scenery in the last chapter!

Wow. Only three chapters and this story just burts with intensity (especially the last chapter, verrrry sexy.) I am in absolute awe, and bow before your supreme talent.

Nicely done. I have often passed stories like this one by, but I love your other stories so much that I knew I couldn't leave it unchecked.

The flow was good, and the only thing I really found... (I don't want to call it wrong, because it's still a fantastic story)... but the only thing I found I somewhat disliked was the fact that it was so short. You're a good writer, and the plot has the potential to be made into something longer. I just felt like there was no middle to the story... just an end and a beginning. Mind you they were very wonderfully written, but it's almost like I've missed four or five chapters.

I'm not telling you to change it, by any means, and I understand completely that sometimes a story (even if it can be lengthened) comes to us in the form of a oneshot of something relatively short, and as an author you just don't want to change it from that original idea. All I'm saying is that I think a lot more could have been done to make it even more spectacular.

The first two chapters were so nicely done, and then it almost seems like you started getting sick of writing it and mashed like ten chapters into one just so you could get it out of the way. Please don't be offended by any of this. I'm not trying to insult you.

I think that perhaps you could have made the chase and defeat of Naraku longer, as well as put a bit more into the courtship period. But that's just me. I still love the story, and it's still on my favorite's list, I just thought you should know that I love it SO much that it saddens me to see it end so quickly.

Anywho, good job, can't wait for your next story!

J~

This is going as an instant fave!  Oh it was so good, tasty, delicious and truly exceptional. 

Excellent.... loved it!  Very well written.

It was a wonderfully written story :) Kept me hooked right till the very end. You're a great author and I hope to read more of your works in the future!

WOW. Please continue this fic. It is nice also to see a fic where Sesshomaru and Inuyasha are on the same side.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

OD nice.

I really hope that Sesshoumaru didn't leave Kagome unprotected.  Especially if Naraku isn't where he is supposed to be.  This is a very interesting story.  Can't wait to read more!

This was delicious my dear! Gotta love a possessive overly protective Sesshoumaru!

This is the nice Christmas I've ever had. :3 Thank you for the new chapter. :3 I'm looking forward for new chapters. :3 Great job

damn im already hooked! can't wait for the update!:)

wow. please update soon.

More please,

Delicious descriptions and hooked like a fish! More more more please!

it was great! =) please do continue this story. =)