This is a pretty good story. I love the character development for Sesshy. I can't wait to see what is next.
I think I like this story, I will need to read a few more chapters to see how it will progress. I like it, but it blends in with all these other stories that are on here. Rin is needed, Kagome goes, Sesshomaru likes her so they flirt. etc. I think if you add some different elements to this it will be a good story. Good luck and use your IMAAAAAGINAAAAATIOOOON! Everytime I hear that word, I think of Spongebob, thats why its written like that. lol.
Very interesting concept and I just love Sesshomaru's whole little tag game. I'm interested to see whats going to happen from here on out though, what happens in the future if the other person gets caught *wink wink*
I just got to read your story - looking pretty good. I am curious where it will go?
This is a cute story, but you left an author's note(hint, hint) that said you may not write anymore if you don't start getting reviews. The last time I checked, holding chapters hostage for more reviews is frowened upon. I would like to read more of this story, hopefully there will be no hostages harmed in the making of this story. You may want to think about editing out that comment.
lol tag... what a fun game ;3. Hehe, keep up the good work im egar to see what you will come up with
Snowfall (Chapter 2) - Tue 22 Dec 2009
I always loved that part. "...Tag, you're it." ^_^ Oh what fun! I don't know if I ever finished reading it. It'll be nice to see how it ends. ^_^
Oh! I think I remember this! Can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^
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