Reviews for Capital Offense by Oroyukae

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KawaiiDemons (Chapter 18) - Thu 07 Jan 2010

ok, i must review this fic! These chapters have been the best and i always love how quick you update. I am sooooo hooked on this fic! Chapter 16 had me crying and 18 had me screaming. Wow, way to go!

 

~KawaiiDemons


love you so much (Chapter 18) - Thu 07 Jan 2010

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

 

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

 

kyaaaah!

 

please don't leave it there!


Goose (Chapter 18) - Thu 07 Jan 2010

O_O OMG! Talk about suspense! I think I had my nose inches from the monitor. Awesome chapter! Can't wait to read what unfolds next, update soon!!!


loveyaa (Chapter 18) - Thu 07 Jan 2010

Ohhhhhh...its getting good!! I love it when madness takes place. Poor everybody in this chapter though. I hope that we get to learn a little bit why Sesshoumaru is...malfuntioning. I seriously can't wait til next time to see how everybody deals with this one :)


snowbird (Chapter 18) - Thu 07 Jan 2010

I hope somehow she finds a way to dispose of Hojo's body.  I have a suspicion about Miroku.  Maybe he's part of an underground.  If he is, maybe he'll help dispose of the body with no possibility of a trace.  He did say that he was going to stop by her house.  From him helping her, he could recruit her and eventually Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha.  I'm eager to know what happens next regarding the body and especially Sesshoumaru's reactions about what he was able to do and his feelings for Kagome.


Yudelle (Chapter 18) - Thu 07 Jan 2010

Oh. My. God. This was such an amazing chapter. I loved how you wrote Kagome's reaction and thoughts. This chapter was truly amazing! I still can't believe Sesshoumaru killed Hojo with his whip. It just proves how strong Sesshoumaru really is, not even a band can restrain him. Oh and one more thing AWWWWWW he does care for Kagome! He is developing feelings for her! And he protected her! I love this chapter. It was nicely written actaully it was very very well written I loved it. You are truly an awesome writer. Oh and thank you for updating it ^-^ you updated two chapters today! Arigato! Can't wait for the next update ^_~


Yudelle (Chapter 17) - Thu 07 Jan 2010

Awesome chapter, but sad at the same time. Poor Kagome. And that Miroku he noticed the way Sesshoumaru and Kagome looked at each other. Nicely written chapter. Can't wait for the next update.


loveyaa (Chapter 17) - Wed 06 Jan 2010

Well...lets just say that I can't wait for things to heat back up. but poor kagome. I really like the way you show how depressed she is without dragging it out. well til next time...


Seshiepersonalpriestess (Chapter 17) - Wed 06 Jan 2010

I don't know if I commented on the previous chapter but I found it very sad. I loved this chapter and I can't wait so see the interaction between Sesshoumaru and Kagome.


Alpine (Chapter 17) - Wed 06 Jan 2010

AHHHHHH!!!!! Poor Kagome.... Dumped and stalked by friend and love interest... (sigh) I can't wait to see what you have in store...


Ceferadel (Chapter 17) - Wed 06 Jan 2010

wow... Hojo is a freak. I hope he doesn't hurt Kagome.. But overall I do say that this is the most creative and in character story of the last two years I have read. I'm thoroughly enjoying each chapter :)


Tana_san (Chapter 16) - Wed 06 Jan 2010

This was so emotionally powerful. The intensity of what was happening had even my heart beating with pain. So few fics I've EVER read had this reaction to me. You did this chapter so well. I'm practically dumbstruck of what to say at this point. Kagome's fear was just so real...as real as Sesshoumaru being told he had no choice in drinking the sedative with the knowledge that no good was going to come to him when or if he woke up. Such a strong being cut down as he was and Kagome's reaction to him was plain to see, the urgenty not to allow him to die. It's as if they're linked to each other somehow...Amazing well done, Lady O!  JEN


loveyaa (Chapter 16) - Wed 06 Jan 2010

Things are getting good...even though things seem to only be getting worse in the story. Well hopefully you will soon show us the silver lining in the cloud. til next time...


love you so much (Chapter 16) - Wed 06 Jan 2010

hmmmm, would be old gal be Kaede? :) awwwwwww they know about Kagome now! What next? ooooo, oooo! You're keeping us on our toes! :D


Yudelle (Chapter 16) - Wed 06 Jan 2010

Awww this chapter is so sad, but nicely written nonetheless. Well even if Kagome does not see Inuyasha, she will still see Sesshoumaru at work, so yay. Oh and I can't believe he let her stroke his hair. I can't wait for the next chapter. I' am absolutley hooked on this story. Great job! :-)


Silver Silence 89 (Chapter 16) - Tue 05 Jan 2010

Awww...poor Sess, Kags, and Inu.... the shit the go through just to be happy....

Sigh....

Another wonderful chapter!!!!

Can't wait for more...


Sess Koibito (Chapter 16) - Tue 05 Jan 2010

Uh oh! Kagome's secret is out ... what's going to happen now? Somehow I don't think Sesshoumaru is going to react favorably to it. Poor Kagome!


Running in Circles (Chapter 16) - Tue 05 Jan 2010

DUN DUN DUN!! Man I love this story. I'm always carried off in the chapters and its like I'm standing there getting a front row seat watching the story unfold. Love it! Yeah for the new Chapter!


CarmMeldoll (Chapter 16) - Tue 05 Jan 2010

Talk about pain like no other...this chapter has gripped my heart and made tears well up...so emotional...I am sure my co workers think I am some kind of crazy!  I love this story, this chapter is just.....Wow....Great story telling as always...now I will have to sit an wait to find out what happens next!


Midnight Cat (Chapter 16) - Tue 05 Jan 2010

OMG!! I swear, this story just takes my emotions and runs with them! I have no words to describe my anger at the treatment of Sesshomaru by the Department, the pain for Kagome, and the utter desperation for the whole situation!!

I am not one to cry, but I could feel my eyes moist for Kagome, and that is saying A LOT about this story!!

I don't know if we the fans can ever bribe an author to update ahead of time, but I would be willing to do much or offer much just to see what happens next!!

PLEASE!! for the love of all that is Inu, please update soon!! The wait alone is going to kill me!!


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