OMG GASP! That was so juicy!  My favorite part was when Sess was touching her skin and him liking the feel of it.  I just don't want this to be the end...I think there is so much more to tell! That was a JUICY LEMON!

perfect!

Well, from the beginning, he was trying to figure out how to use her to get the sword anyway, so I say a fitting end to a great short story. Another wonderful Job!

I thought it was great! I liked the way you had Kagome tying herself to Rin, yet, somehow, there was something that seemed to be tying her to Sesshoumaru...Something undefined, yet very real. And Sesshoumaru's taking of her just seemed like the logical course. Excellent tale.

I LOVED this chapter!!! It fit perfectly with thier individual characters. I eagerly await the next chapter. I am forever your divoted reader. It was great how you portrayed that Sesshomaru's curiosity got them into thier position. That added to the WOW factor. Please, please update soon.

Thank you for this story.  To me it seemed a very realistic picture of Sesshoumaru and Kagome, and what their relationship could be.  Of course, being the person that I am, I picture them growing closer and being happy together.  Not that Sesshoumaru would ever admit that of course.  I have enjoyed reading this wonderful story!

The thing I like most about this story is the fact that Sesshoumaru's tryst with Kagome began with curiosity. He found her reactions intriguing, therefore he continues to elict them. The characterization is spot on -- then again, I shouldn't be surprised. You're a fantastic writer!

Oh, wait.  It's over?  Please, write some more, this is just too good to say goodbye to...

Oooh, more, more!  And hurry, please!  This is just tooo good!

brilliant! I loved it

wow. this is a very nice start! the plot is well written and detailed. Your grammar is impeccable! i really can't wait to see what else you have in store for us and the protagonist! :D pls continue soon!

I am really enjoying the fic!

Hey girl!!! I think your story is special, because I really like how you wrote sessh.... a total idiot. Can´t wait for the next part. ;)

Fantastic! Just my kind of Sess. You kept him so well in character!

Kags' response is also very in character. And so, like your other stories, I concluded that your story is great!!!

Thanks for creating this wonderful will-be short story. Can't wait for the undoubtedly awesome ending!

~miwa

Whether unique or not, rest assured that this, along with all your other offerings, is GREATLY appreciated for the time and effort you put into ALL your writing!!  Frankly, I like it... end of story, right?? *snicker*  Seriously, I'm sorry I haven't had time to review anything of late, but I wanted you to know that I read it ALL, with great anticipation and satisfaction.  PLEASE keep writing!! :D ~~Wiccan~~

Poor Kagome, after she helps save Inuyasha twice he doesn't even try to save her?  He doesn't even care that his brother has taken her?  Maybe it's better that she is with Sesshoumaru.  While he will never care about her, hopefully he will take better care of her.  Thank you so much for starting this wonderful story.  I can't wait to read more!

Well, I'm interested to see where this is going... only two parts, huh? 

Amber

So far I like it. I really hope she will have the power to fight Sess off. I want to see him eat a little dirt.

Hey the jerk deserves it lol

Oh goody!! I really like it. I dig the possessiveness... and his evil-ness its hot. But! I love the part where he told her its in the inu nature to go after what they want. Can't wait for the last part

I like this first part. This was a great beginning. So, with her only learning healing, does that mean she will never figure out the opposite and learn defense? I can see a fight building with how feisty she is.