Poor Kagome.  Too bad that she is so beautiful.  I wonder if Sesshoumaru will think she is beautiful, after having been around his mother for so long?  I just hope that he will find a way to save her from his mother.  Thank you for the update!  Please post again soon!

Gosh, I can't stand Sesshomaru's mother. I'd like to snap her neck, lol. I'm taking Sesshomaru in pity right now, I'd steal him, and run away with him. Anyhow, this chapter was once again beautifully written, I once again love your style. You always leave me wanting for more. The plot has been revealed, well written, lol.

Now I can't wait until their faithful meeting! =D

Update soon!

Love the beginning to your story!  I'm so excited to see how both Kikyo and Kagome are treated growing up.  Thank you for having Lord Akio be able to see the beauty within Masuyo.  Shouldn't that be so much more important than the way a person looks on the outside?  Can't wait to read more!

Excellent start, I can picture Vinasu so clearly. The descriptions with the birthing scene were nice as well. I was wondering though, Sesshoumaru pledged alleigence to his mother...? Or Is he under the beleif that simply being her son means that he is tied to her, hate or not? It's not the fact that's she's western lady that binds him, is it?  Could you clarify it a bit later on through his point of veiw? I know that he holds respect while simultaniously being revolted by her, but how could he justify his loyalty?

nicely written, I like it, cant wait for an update!!!

oh WOW my favorite myth Cupid & Psyche hehehe i cant wait to see how u write this out keep up the good work

Am I ever so grateful that you decided to turn it into a chapter story. If this had been the end, you would had to call 911, cause I'd be dead of a heart attack. You have a magnificent writing style, and I love where this is going. There is much to be done with this story, and I can't wait for Sesshomaru and Kagome <3. Great story, I'll be reviewing every chapters!

I love the start! Keep going!