I love it!!! It is fantastically written and I want more, more, MORE!  I especially love the layout of the story, the glimpse into the mind of Sesshomaru and your ability to keep him in character.  You have my official stamp of approval!!! Did I mention that I love this story?!

The last paragraph definitely shows 'pride'. Nice chapter :D

I thought I should read this again when i realized i'd forgotten to review. It is heart-rending, Angel. So much pain and suffering... but so well done. Very well written. And the end, where Kagome embraces him, calms him, is just beautiful.

Angel, I can see him mentally stamping his foot at the end. LOL! This is so good! I look forward to your next one!

Beautifully done, Angel, excellent insight into Sesshoumaru's character and his dislike of his brother. You are such a good writer.

I really enjoyed this one shot.  Sesshoumaru was completely in character yet you were able to convey his general dissatisfaction with his life.  I enjoyed the little details of his day and I have to agree with him for the most part it sounds horrible tedious.  The way you had him describe Kagome as well as his reaction to her was priceless.  She is right he is definitely in a funk.  Anyhoo... great job!

im thinking of going soon to this challenge! Come, lets do it together! WHat do you think?

I like it ^.^ I like how Sesshomaru was written.

Good Job :)