Reviews for Headstrong by CosmicAnomaly

KyuubiPandoraChan (Chapter 3) - Mon 26 Apr 2010

Oh my...Where have this fiction been all this time. I love the drama and the urgh...while it makes me mad at...I dunno. I just got caught in the story as well. This is good. Gonna keep up with this story.


TahrinM (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Nov 2009

OMG CosmicAnomaly I am big fan! Please continue the other fanfic too =). This one is so catchy - Sesshy seems so out of this world coz he is a author LOL CUTEEE~~~~~ Though he is still very bossy "INTERVIEW ME" ROLF! looking forward to more chapters =)


Rowdys girl (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Nov 2009

This is good, and funny, too. I can't wait to see how he gets his interview. And I love her trying to figure out how to block his number! LOL! I look forward to your next update.

There were a couple of things: desperacy is not a word (yet). The word you want is desperation.

You used calloused, which does mean thick-skinned, but I think perturbed or harassed would be better. Harassed would be my choice, having finished the chapter. Especially, if his father is trying to undermine his career.

Other than these two things, it's a really good story and very well written.

 

rowdysgirl


CookieAsylum (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Nov 2009

I like where you're going with this. I like how you put them in different positions. Sesshoumaru isn't the top dog and Kagome is the one calling the shots. I like how you described the beginning, with Sesshoumaru running late and looking all disarray. Keep up the good work! ^^

 

- CA


sesshys_jaded_samuri (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Nov 2009
This started off very interesting... I certainly hope that you choose to continue it.

Acadia (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Nov 2009

Hello, I'djust like to say that your story was an instant favourite. I love to find stories by authors who can actually write properly! I hope you update soon, I'll be waiting.

Acadia


Crescent Dreams (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Nov 2009

It seems like a good start to an intersting story!  I'm looking forward to the next chapter.


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