another great chapter, thanks for the update!
autumngold (Chapter 2) - Wed 04 Nov 2009
Kagome was crazy to try to groom a starving, half-wild Sesshoumaru. He doesn't remember her, and when she hurt him he must have seen her as a threat. Hopefully they will learn to get along soon. I also hope that Kagome remembers to feed him again soon. Maybe some food will help him get back to his human form? Please post another chapter soon. I can't wait to read more!
Love this!! What a fantastic start! I can't wait to see what Sesshoumaru's reaction to Kagome is. I love how so many of her loved ones have survived into the future. Well done I look forward to more.
autumngold (Chapter 1) - Mon 02 Nov 2009
Great beginning to your story! What is Kagome going to do? I really doubt that Sesshoumaru will remember her, especially if he has been trapped in the cave for hundreds of years. Please, please come back with your second chapter soon! I really can't wait for your next update!
katlady (Chapter 1) - Mon 02 Nov 2009
very intresting thought i hate you for the cliffy now update soon please I like were this is going
Saeko (Chapter 1) - Mon 02 Nov 2009
Really liking it so far. I like the way you've detailed everything. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Also, just for the record, thanks for not ransoming the chapters. I absolutely HATE it when authors require a certain amount of reviews or something to put out the next chapter. In fact, I dont read those stories again, after. Glad to see you're not one of them.
Sassy C (Chapter 1) - Sun 01 Nov 2009
Oh my gosh! Sesshomaru?! Matted?! Dirty?! Impossible! I want to read more, don't just leave it there! Why is he in his natural form? I want to knooooow! Very well written, over all. There was only one time where you lost the tense you started with (i.e past v. present). This was very well written, and what a great plot line! Please update soon! :)
sunset in love (Chapter 1) - Sun 01 Nov 2009
you are really mean, you know that, you left it at cliff hanger, and i'm about to fall down... now, if only you would update soon....
articfire69 (Chapter 1) - Sun 01 Nov 2009
love it, keep up the great work
(Chapter 1) - Sun 01 Nov 2009
Wow you really started off wonderfully... I like what you wrote was Kagome's reaction to being stuck in the present and also how the three from the pass are interacting with her. Great work on how you descibe the scenes and people, you make them so very vivid and alive.
One thing though wouldn't Kagome have sense Sesshoumaru demonic essence with her miko abilities?
Looking forward to your next update!
Wispr
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