This is a good story. I can't wait for another chapter. 

Yo!

* turning pockets inside out* I don't have any suggestions... but I do have a question! I was very impressed with your protrayal of Sesshomaru so I was wondering how you managed to keep him character yet present a soft side to him. So, yup. Besides your fanfic being awesome and I can't wait to read more that'sa 'bout it.

I’m very impress with this story, nicely done and written out indeed.

I can you made a lot effort and work to this fan fiction. But why oh why did leave it there at chapter three. I wanna read more see longer chapters if made possible by you next time.

Please update again.

I never knew you had such a talent for fan fiction writing as you do for your Iy art making. Everyone is very much IC form what I can see.

Sesshoumaru must be happy to know that Kagome wants to leave.  Not that he would have let her stay at his palace, but at least he knows that she isn't going to make him look weak by trying to stay with him.  It's too bad that Kagome doesn't have someone to help her control her powers.  She would make Sesshoumaru a strong ally if she could.  Please post again soon, this is a very interesting story!

Awesome chapter, really like you are doing Kagome and Sesshoumaru interacting. Looking forward to more!

Wispr

Off to a good start!  I can't wait to see what happens next!  :)

Very nicely written, wonderful work in showing a glimps into the inner workings of Sesshoumaru's mind.

Wispr

This is really great... I hope that you continue soon. I can't wait to see what happens.

Hugs ^_^

Love the beginning to your story!  I like that Kagome was strong enough to save herself, maybe not from death but from the demon.  Sesshoumaru has to admire her for that.  He should admire her for saving Rin also.  Please post an update soon!  I really want to read another chapter!

C, I'm glad you are back and drawing again...even happier that you are writing and posting here on Dokuga. Don't stop please

Awesome start... love how welll you did the characters personalities and fantastic work in creating such vivid scenes!

Wispr

This was a wonderful start to what I'm hoping will be a wonderful story. However, you shouldn't have to rely on reviews to writeor continue such a wonderful piece. I hope you continue this, no matter how many reviews you may or may not get. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, please update when you get the chance :)