LOL! *fans self* The final line of this story was all it took to make it a PERFECT piece of work! Well done - I love your works!!
"The monk’s hentai-ness was clearly contagious." and "Now, all she had to do was get him to work on his personality, because it still sucked." those lines had me laughing my butt off! i loved this! it was so hot =x i like the idea that Inuyasha's like "fine" :p hahahahaha this made me giggle!
I really like the first chapter. The last line was awesome. lol.
Surreal (Chapter 1) - Sun 01 Nov 2009
I totally agree with DemonQueen17....sequel!!!
or better yet....a chapter story? please?
i loved it :)
that was laugh out loud funny!!!!! Great job!
autumngold (Chapter 1) - Sat 31 Oct 2009
Lucky, lucky Kagome. Just imagine how miserable she would be if Inuyasha had won as alpha male. What a fun story!
sunset in love (Chapter 1) - Sat 31 Oct 2009
it's great to have another shot from you....
Great One-shot! You have proven again why you are one of my favorites. You balance the right amounts of comedy, drama, and kink to make a great story.
good story can't wait for the next chapter
Kanna37 (Chapter 1) - Sat 31 Oct 2009
LOL! Personality sucking... wow. I'm still chuckling - especially about the whole 'peeing to claim' thing. I could sooo see that. But it would be wrong. Way wrong. Lmao.
Amber
I have one word to say about this and I will repeat it several times: SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!
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