Reviews for Undone by CookieAsylum

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KShadeslady (Chapter 5) - Mon 21 Aug 2017

Things are moving right along. Looks like Kagome may have found a new teacher. Hope you update this soon. I really like it. 

KShadeslady (Chapter 3) - Mon 21 Aug 2017

So glad you filled in the gaps for those of us not up on YYH. There are a few Sess/Kag writers that do crossovers with YYH. This is not the first time I've seen these characters. This is fun and I really hope you keep it going. 

KShadeslady (Chapter 2) - Mon 21 Aug 2017

Really nice chapter. I like the way the story is unfolding. It's not rushed but still has a lot of information packed into it. I like that you are keeping Sesshomaru restrained. I loved the mention of that stray strand of hair. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 1) - Mon 21 Aug 2017

Nice opening chapter! Cheers!

Kae (Chapter 5) - Sat 15 Jun 2013

What do I think? I think I am really enjoying this!  I love how the characters are interacting, and this is all so very fun!

BigFan~ (Chapter 5) - Mon 14 Nov 2011

When will Shippo, Sesshoumaru and Kagome meet?!

Sara (Chapter 5) - Sat 16 Apr 2011

What a concept! You are doing an amazing job with this story. I'm looking forward your updates. :)

soulNchantress (Chapter 4) - Wed 30 Mar 2011

I just re-read this story again.  I'm really hooked and looking forward to more!!  Update soon, please!!

Hesunohana (Chapter 4) - Thu 15 Apr 2010

an interesting plot. really !

RC (Chapter 4) - Wed 30 Dec 2009

LOL, "The Great and the Terrible...Naraku" XDD

Getting really really interesting here :D The plot's twisting into something good x) Please keep up the wonderful work!

Tante Slyvie (Chapter 4) - Mon 21 Dec 2009

This is getting good wonder what going to happen next bah please continue.

InuLover (Chapter 3) - Sun 22 Nov 2009

I'm kinda liking this story, but, could you help me out here?  I know this is probably a really stupid question, but I am not familiar with the "YYH Universe".  First off, what is YYH?  Second, it sounds like you've also included some Naruto in it, with the kyuubi and all.  It's interesting..this is the first crossover fic I've read.  Now, if I just knew what the other anime was....

Tante Slyvie (Chapter 3) - Sat 21 Nov 2009

This is getting interesting please continue.

RC (Chapter 3) - Wed 18 Nov 2009

Very interesting plot :D Please keep up the awesommee work :))

Tante Slyvie (Chapter 3) - Tue 17 Nov 2009

Now this is story is awesome please continue

Heartless-iPod-Ninja (Chapter 3) - Mon 16 Nov 2009

Yay yay yay!!  *dance*  Cookie, I'm SO GLAD you've updated this.  Yuu Yuu Hakusho is one of my ALL TIME favorite animes, and I just recently popped in the last couple of DVDs for the refresher, so I am RIGHT THERE WITH YOU on this.  I be watchin' you... o_0   Please update soon.

autumngold (Chapter 3) - Mon 16 Nov 2009

Thank you for the update.  I'm so glad that this is going to be a Sesshoumaru/Kagome story!  I just hope that everyone doesn't hate Kagome.  It's not her fault that the wish went bad.  Please update soon!

Diane (Chapter 3) - Mon 16 Nov 2009

Really liked the chapter & hated that it ended there, hopefully you can update soon, there did seem to be a word missing here & there though, if I remember correctly (& I may not be) 1 sentence ends in their & it's like their what?

about this; (Mazoku - YuYu Hakusho term for "youkai") I'm not sure about that it seems to be a term applied to Yusuke along with Toushin so it may be his youkai type. I really need to get that YYH the complete guide book, I have the 1 for IY & it's great to get info from, funnily enough it even spells Tessaiga correctly.

MoMo (Chapter 3) - Mon 16 Nov 2009

Wowzers^-^ . I am suprised to see a Fanfiction up here a crossover between YuYu and Inu. Lol I am sooo Happy, I used to write crossovers..between Inu and Yu Yu. I am assuming this after Yusuke has gotten his demon powers and the second tournament is over? I think so If I read right. I ammm soooo Uber Happy Please continue. I love that you know so much about the YuYu Universe Its one of my favorite anime's!

anon (Chapter 3) - Mon 16 Nov 2009

I like crossovers and so far this looks good. I'm glad you're not making Kagome strong. She wasnt strong in the anime so when she's portrayed with god like powers and fighting skills I laugh and leave the story.

About Hiei...I hope this isnt one of those Kagome/Sess/third person stories. I never liked those either. Youkai are possesive. They dont share their mates with anyone.

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