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cbrendible (Chapter 14) - Tue 17 Nov 2009

Please miss may i have some more?


Ameire (Chapter 14) - Mon 16 Nov 2009

I. Love. This.

Thankyou for this chapter! It's terrific~ :3 The kiss was just perfect! *shifts guilty* I'm looking forward to when their brought back-seperately. I know, mean me, but I'm really interested. I wanna see Sesshoumaru's reaction a little more than kagome's too that, but I can't wait for the next chapter. Bravo for keepingit good and interesting *claps* ;)

 

Thanks for updating~


autumngold (Chapter 14) - Mon 16 Nov 2009

I'm so sad that Kagome and Sesshoumaru won't be sent back together.  Please don't let her kiss or have sex with Inuyasha!  She just has to realize what Sesshoumaru means to her.  Please let her wait until he can get to her.  I know that she doubts his feelings, but please don't let her be unfaithful after he's waited so long.  Just because Inuyasha now thinks he "might" choose Kagome doesn't mean she has to choose him!  Great update!


Kristina Kimball (Chapter 14) - Mon 16 Nov 2009

ooooooo, good chapter, and nice kiss...lol

good job and update soon...


knifethrower (Chapter 14) - Mon 16 Nov 2009

So InuYasha's interference is part of the workings of fate!  I had wondered...  And Sesshy's letting Kagome see his passionate side.  Oooh, I'm liking it...  More soon?


stars (Chapter 13) - Mon 16 Nov 2009

please updata soon


Kristina Kimball (Chapter 13) - Sun 15 Nov 2009

hi,

good job so far...hehe on sesshomaru spying...i can't wait to see when Kagome tells Sesshomaru that she is in love with him...it was cool that we got to see some of her thoughts too.

good job and update soon


Kristina Kimball (Chapter 2) - Sun 15 Nov 2009

Hi,

good chapter...it is cool that sesshomaru kept his promise...can't wait to see what happens next..

good job...


Kristina Kimball (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Nov 2009

Hi,

I love this story...it is well done so far...it will be interesting to see what happens next...it is interesting that Kagome got that feeling...it is sad that sesshomaru died, but i see he was helping save his pack...

good job and update soon...


Kabukicho (Chapter 13) - Sun 15 Nov 2009

I am delighted by this story. It flows along at a wonderful pace; no instant love, but no incredibly long, drawn out sort of thing, either. Apart from that, the writing is splendid.

 

In short, I eagerly await the next chapter of "In Death, Trust Me, As You Didn't in Life."


Rowdys girl (Chapter 3) - Sun 15 Nov 2009

It's really not nice to make people cry like this. 

I found one little thing: Still holding each others hands. I think it should be: Still holding each other's hand. Other's, in this case, is possessive. That being so, I think hand should be singular because they aren't holding both hands; that would make it difficult to walk - even in the next life. ;)


Rowdys girl (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Nov 2009

And you have me crying already! This is a really good start to what is fixin' to be a good story. I found one spelling error: distraight - distraught. Other than that, I didn't see anything. Of course, I was pretty taken up in the story and crying (so mean - you made me cry!) so I wasn't at my sharpest. Why do I have the feeling that I should keep my kleenex by me through the rest of this tale?


Esha Napoleon (Chapter 13) - Sun 15 Nov 2009

Hi its me Esha ;)

 

This was the best chapter yet!!!! WHo knew that Sesshy was such a Hentai. A extremely sexy one at that!!!!!

LOVE IT!!!!!


autumngold (Chapter 13) - Sun 15 Nov 2009

So, did Sesshoumaru only catch her while bathing one time?  Or did he keep being a pervert and showing up more often?  I know, he's too honorable for that, but it is funny!  Thanks for the update!  I'm so glad that all of Inuyasha's friends realize how he really feels about Kagome.  Now I think he needs to be honest with himself and admit his wish for her is selfish.  Please update soon!


helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 12) - Sat 14 Nov 2009

hmm..plot twist, eh? wonder if that'll have something to do with her promising Sesshomaru forever if he wishes it. I hope so at least. ^.^

please update soon!


Jess (Chapter 1) - Sat 14 Nov 2009

I love it so far :) I can't wait to see what happens next! You rule!


oksana (Chapter 12) - Sat 14 Nov 2009

Its getting more interesting with each chapter.  new story line also. will be definetly waiting for more of this story


knifethrower (Chapter 12) - Sat 14 Nov 2009

Oooh, I loved the reciprocated vow, it gave me goosebumps!  An excellent chapter in an excellent story.  You rock, Amber, but then, you always do...


zenfluence (Chapter 12) - Sat 14 Nov 2009

I have a feeling to what this plot twist is.. but I won't ruin the suprise for anyone.

I was detirred from reading this because of the title. But I love it now.

keep up the good work


1CarinoInu (Chapter 12) - Sat 14 Nov 2009

Love, love, LOVE this story.  A very different dynamic, and although I hate that fact how selfish InuYasha is being, can you blame him?  Update soon :)


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