good story...I cried alot through the last 2 chapters and through this one as well...Im happy that you went on with the story. It will be interesting to see if Kagome really comes back...If I was Kagome I would be very pissed at sesshomaru for doing that to my child...I would be mad at everyone...
good job and update soon...
OMG that was so sad! How awful for the little one....is there ANY chance of bringing Kagome back? For Sesshoumaru and Inari to suffer not just the loss of Kagome, but of their friends and family? Truly tragic, but well done.
Yes, it would be wonderful to see this turned into a story, but I don't know if I could handle a tragedy. Maybe the Kamis would return their beloved to earth? Since Naraku returned, would not the Shikon Miko need to be returned, only to defeat him once again, and maybe even for just a short time to bring closure before having to return to heaven?
poor little Inori, first losing his Mum then everyone thinking that his a murderer. yes i think this should be a full story it has a great start to it
I like the first two chapters. It would be an interesting story if you continue it. Nice writing.
oh Vou...that was so heartwrenching and tragic (T.T) Even so, I could appreciate the beauty of her death and how it gave rise to her child's life. Ahhh the angst is painful! Good job!
ashley (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 Oct 2009
best sad story ever. im crying right now.
O_O YOU MUST WRITE MORE!!! what abotu Naraku and the jewel!!! you hafta bring Kagome back!!!!! *pounce syou in r0oish fit of me-ness!!!!! MOU!!!!
This story is soooo sad, and it was very well written! Thank you so much for writing, and i will be looking forward to more of your work!
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