It’s been so long that I’m having to reread the whole thing. I'll post any errors I find after I'm done reading them in case you're interested, if not feel free to ignore. Was really happy to see an update.
Diane (Chapter 3) - Mon 23 Aug 2010
Corroborate should be cooperate here (it is a word just not the 1 you meant to use); Just corroborate while you still have some dignity before I get Inuyasha to help me hold you down.” Kagome threatened.
So glad you finally updated!!!!! I can't wait to read about sesshomaru's mother!!!! eeeeekkk.....it's just too exciting. Please update soon
Banana (Chapter 8) - Sun 22 Aug 2010
oh no serioulsy? it has to stop here for now? i was so getting into it ad i can't wait ugh
Banana (Chapter 5) - Sun 22 Aug 2010
Unexplainable urges for violence. I was eating when I decided Sessh running into a bird was a great idea lol
this has me lmfao hard haha
Banana (Chapter 1) - Sun 22 Aug 2010
when miroku was taling to inu you wrote "expect" and I think you meant "accept"
Off for more! hehehehe >_<
InuYasha was overeating? Though he does like to eat ramen a lot... Should it have been overreacting or maybe over "heating"?
(Chapter 1) - Thu 12 Aug 2010
I'm commenting on my own story so sue me. I'm actually working on another chapter for this story after such a long time and it'll be up within a couple days.
maousama (Chapter 7) - Thu 08 Jul 2010
OMG i just love the end ! it was so funny !!!! it was really brilliant!
hehe cute....now if only she could get him to play fetch *drool*
jojo661538 (Chapter 7) - Sat 09 Jan 2010
hahaha its great keep up the great work ^_^
I love your story!!!! please keep writing. I've started reading your other fic and i like it too. please continue this story.
leckie (Chapter 7) - Tue 15 Dec 2009
very funny can't wait for more
izzy (Chapter 7) - Mon 07 Dec 2009
haahaha nice one. ok heres an idea that you can paly off of . since the string cant brake you can have them some how fall from the sky and at stuck hanging from a tree for an undiscribed amount of hours...oofcourse seshoumaru is probably able to get them down but he soesnt have to tell kagome that <.< hehehe
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