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Brittany (Chapter 18) - Sat 12 Feb 2011

This story is one of my all time favorites. I have read it about 10 times and it never gets old. I am very much into scottish love stories and truth be told I wish kagome would get with Balthazar. If you should ever do one like that it would be AMAZING. you did an excellent job on the accents on brouge of the scottish inus. BRAVO!! keep up the good work


Speklez (Chapter 18) - Wed 15 Dec 2010

I just wanted to tell you how much I truly enjoyed this story. As a victom myself i did tend to skim the parts that brought up some rather painful memories, but over all i am glad that everything woked out for her in the end. i am living proof that happy endings can be obtained even in the worst of true stories.


Eris (Chapter 10) - Fri 22 Oct 2010

I haven't finished the story yet but is it wrong of me to love Balthazar??  lol....Great work.  


darkangelelf07 (Chapter 16) - Mon 02 Aug 2010

I absolutely love your character, Balthazar. Thank you for writing a lovely story. 

DarkAngelElf07


Ev (Chapter 18) - Mon 19 Apr 2010

I am fully aware that this story is over and done with, however i can not help but wonder what it would be like had the last few chapters gone differently and Conner or Balthazar got the girl.

 

*sighs*

 

Personally, i was rooting for Balthazar. I don't know what it was about him, but I have a feeling that he isn't one to be easily swayed and the fact that he cared for Kagome so deeply is so heart wrenching. Sequel? That would be really worth the read! Then again, all your works are. You're an amazing writer!


theunknownchild (Chapter 18) - Sun 18 Apr 2010

Wow. Sitting down and reading that in one sitting was really emotional. Great job! I couldn't stop until I finished it...


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 18) - Wed 07 Apr 2010

I... wow just wow... this was an awesome story, sucked me right in to the point where I read it straight through. You did a great job, I fell in love with your OC's, was angry at the inu tachi for what they did, and greatful to Kikyou for remembering the even though she was dead, she still had a heart. Wonderful job!


Danielle (Chapter 18) - Sat 20 Feb 2010

This is a wonderfully written story! I just finished reading it a second time, and I feel it was better than the first time I read it. I love the original characters from Scotland and thought their development was great - none of them were to complex, or made to powerful, and they all had weaknesses and secrets that made them more real. The story's progression was very well planned out; I didn't feel at any time that the plot was rushed or skipped anything. I especially loved the love triangle aspect (or would it be a love square?) It added a different kind of emotional tension and angst than was already present. I did notice something on my second read through though - when Inuyasha and the gang brought Kagome to Sesshomaru it indicated he picked her up with one arm, yet in chapter 17 it sad he held her in his 'arms'.  This is probably just a typo, but made me want to look again to see if any other chapters had it switch between Sesshomaru have one arm or two. Overall, this was a great story and I look forward to reading more wonderfully created works.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 18) - Mon 01 Feb 2010

yEy! that was excellent!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 16) - Mon 01 Feb 2010

T_T thats abotu the sadest thing ever 


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 15) - Mon 01 Feb 2010

this is anamzing growth chapter i must say that i really like this, though i'm starting not to like the scottish inu's >_> LORDS SESSHO! i'm so loyal unless there's an itachi near by, its Sessho all the way!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 14) - Mon 01 Feb 2010

i'm sad for payton  :l and jaken being sweet? omg *dies* *revies self to keep reading*


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 13) - Mon 01 Feb 2010

She took with her only the box and her mirror. By the time she got done with Naraku, he would rue the day he laid his hands upon her beloved sister. He would find that Kagura's big sister was going to teach him the hardest lesson of all: Payback was a bitch. <-- yanno i tihnk i love you now b/c no one really give Kanna the chance to do anything! really she needs to have some say in what goes on with her life and i like that your making her vicious >:3


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 12) - Mon 01 Feb 2010

The palace residents froze as a loud and vicious snarl ripped through the palace. Ashitaka's eyes widened and he gasped, "Dear Kami. Get to your chambers and lock your doors!" <- that is greatness =x


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 11) - Mon 01 Feb 2010

Kagome paled and shook her head. 'Out of the frying pan and into the fire, Kagome.' She thought.

She turned and walked into her chambers. She needed a nap.

 

Naps solve ALL problems lmao!!! hahahahahahaha


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 10) - Mon 01 Feb 2010

"Lord Ashitaka, I appreciate your hospitality, but I really don't care to hear what you people desire. Let me tell you what I demand. I want your full cooperation in hunting Naraku down. I want you to back the hell off of the western lands, seeing as that is now my home. Finally, I want you to make it very clear to every damn noble here that I won't be anyone's victim anymore. Cross me and I will strike back. Work with me and I will be your best friend. This is not up for negotiation. Now, what is your answer?" Kagome said, her eyes trained upon the hosting lord.

 

AWESOME!!!! *chuckles*


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 9) - Mon 01 Feb 2010

:l i dont like conner he's getting in the way of lord fluffybutt i dont like him at all.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 5) - Sun 31 Jan 2010

yanno i know this story must have pissed off your spell cheker on your word program hahaha its sad but i love it. i cant wait to get to kagome's anger.


wickedone43 (Chapter 18) - Fri 08 Jan 2010

This was AWESOME!!  I loved the Scottish twist in it!!  Very creative.  The story line was great and it flowed smoothly.  My congrats on this fic.  I will be looking for more of your fics here and at FFN.net and AFFN.net.  I think I have seen some of your work there too.  Again my congratulations and thanks for keeping us all entertained with your works.


Lady Lillian (Chapter 18) - Wed 04 Nov 2009

Best Story EVER!!!!! would love to read more stories envolving the Scottish Inus !!!


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