sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Sep 2009
i would like separate chapters, but i liked the story ^_^

Silver Silence 89 (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Sep 2009
Hi :-) I think you should separate the chapters. It'll make the story much easier to read, and it give you the opportunity to get more reviews in the story overall. Just some helpful advice. ~Silver Silence 89

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