I just finished the first chapter of Unspoiled, and I love it. You set it up so perfectly. And lets face it, at this point, after following your other collections, I'll read whatever you tell me too. Hahaha, I hope you keep up the good work! I can't wait for more, your collections brighten up my day.
miki (Chapter 1) - Wed 02 Sep 2009
| quite good, i hope to read more soon ( the " good prospect match" was an older shippo?)
| Love it! I'm having a hard time picturing this story as a series of one shots though.... humm at least I think that's what you said you were doing. The plot seems to be following a very specific course so far.
NtvHawnGrl (Chapter 1) - Wed 02 Sep 2009
| AWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! Thats sooo adorable!!!! i Love it n want more!!
loveless (Chapter 1) - Wed 02 Sep 2009
| Wow! This is great so far. You made a good choice in making another fanfic. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.
malom (Chapter 1) - Wed 02 Sep 2009
| You will spoil us with "Unspoiled" forthright! I am so excited about this!
*rubs hands together*
Saholia (Chapter 1) - Wed 02 Sep 2009
| Very nice beginning, certainly has me hooked...lol. So, who were those two really back in her time? ^.^
| I love this! It is so much more exuberant than most of your writing, it is a refreshing change.
| Oh... this is going to be interesting! Very interesting! ;D
Little!Sesshoumaru rocks my socks. Already. <3 Wonderful beginning, and I'm thinking this one will be a great follow-on when you finish 'Imperceptible'. I really can't wait to see more!
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| Perfection as always! I am excited to see where this goes.
Ashley (Chapter 1) - Wed 02 Sep 2009
| Nice story i think it would be great if you continue it though update soon:)
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