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Koree (Chapter 8) - Wed 12 Aug 2015

Sooooo Many Answered Questions Yet Soooooooo Many Unanswered Questions ! Amazing Story :)


Karaquantae (Chapter 8) - Fri 24 Jul 2015

dude, kay, youre latest update im reading when im supposed to be in bed and im like,no, it cant be inuyasha, it CANT be omfg it is it is!!! *high pitched squealing* *gets yelled at* perfect -.- great story tho


Marie (Chapter 8) - Wed 22 Jul 2015

I am intrigued you either have personal history or you have done allot of research which ever one it's making for a great story and how you introducing everyone to the story.  You have my attention. I will be following up in this story


Kairichan43 (Chapter 8) - Wed 22 Jul 2015

Forget Me Nots are such beautiful flowers. 

I'm glad to see Inuyasha make his appearance. I'm curious to see how Sesshoumaru will react. 

And I have caught up! Thanks so much for the story. I'm really enjoying your writing style, the way the characters are portrayed, and the plot. 

I'm really excited for the next update. :) 


Kairichan43 (Chapter 7) - Wed 22 Jul 2015

I have a feeling that the Spider could perhaps be much closer to them than they realize. 

But yay, Sesshoumaru is back! 

It's also nice to see a dynamic between Kagome and Shippo, albeit a small one. Hopefully, they can help each other. 

Thanks for the chapter! 


Kairichan43 (Chapter 6) - Wed 22 Jul 2015

I feel so bad for all of them, but alas I have hope that there is a light at the end of the tunnel. 

Your descriptions of Onigumo have me very curious about his character. 

Thanks so much for the chapter! 


Kairichan43 (Chapter 5) - Wed 22 Jul 2015

I'm really loving this story. My favorite part of this chapter was Miroku, Kagome, and Sango eating the pie. Moments like those really are good for the mind and soul. 

Thank you for the chapter! 


Kairichan43 (Chapter 4) - Wed 22 Jul 2015

Poor Kagome! 

Thank you for the chapter! 


No Uta (Chapter 8) - Tue 21 Jul 2015

YEAYUS it's Inuyasha! I love that mutt! I'm thrilled you've thrown him in the mix. This should definitely make for some comedic relief if not extremely interesting interactions between he and his  brother. Kaede broods  like Batman haha. I greatly enjoy her character. She's a more serious and darker version of herself. Shippo seems to be coming along. Splendid touch with the mention of the blood and his skin - phenomenal imagery. I liked how you added Ginta and Hakkaku as construction workers who ruined Kagome's Forger-me-nots. Poor Sango and Miroku. Their story is such a heartwrenching one. I cannot wait for more Naraku. His character is my absolute favourite of them all. 


Kairichan43 (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Jul 2015

I think the idea of a bell signalling Sango's arrival is actually really beautiful. 

The lack of demons doesn't hinder my enjoyment of the story. The story is wonderful without them too! 

Thank you for the chapter! 


Kairichan43 (Chapter 2) - Tue 21 Jul 2015

I'm really enjoying Sesshomaru's curiosity. Thanks for the chapter! 


Kairichan43 (Chapter 1) - Tue 21 Jul 2015

This is really good! My favorite part was the part about the water being used to get rid of the "spiders." Thanks for the chapter and the story! 


Haven (Chapter 8) - Tue 21 Jul 2015

Oh my, how will this play out? I'm also curious if you're going to bring Kouga into the fanfiction. Maybe have him have a severe case of obsession' when he meets Kagome? 


InumeT_FlyGirl (Chapter 7) - Thu 02 Jul 2015

NIce! Very Nice. I love it so far!

Addicted really.

I can NOT wait for the next installment!

 

Fly


No Uta (Chapter 7) - Thu 02 Jul 2015

How I've missed this story of yours. It is wonderful to see you've updated. It is always worth the wait, for every chapter gradually reveals tidbits of information -never too much yet just enough. I've enjoyed your introduction of Shippo and how you're weaving his background to run parallel with the loss of his father in the manga/anime. His father being skinned alive and being human in this fic, made it all the more intense. I've enjoyed your emphasis on his human skin being tossed upon Shippo, by the "Spider". I've also enjoyed you referring to him as a serial killer. Shippo s clutching of a headless mouse while in his sleep brilliantly demonstrated his current mental state. The colorful fashion in which you've painted the boy had bit the head off the mouse, beautifully demonstrates how profoundly disturbed child is. You're also developing Kagome's motherly instinct towards Shippo by having placed him in her room to look after. The character development is phenomenal. I'm excited to see what other characters you may possibly introduce next and how you manage to work their own original tales into the universe you've created all within the confines of a ward. I see that Dr. Taisho has returned. He was affected by Kagome's lack of faith in him. His presence has definitely brightened her spirits. Especially after the day/night she and Miroku underwent. Between Sango's own demons being triggered over Kohaku and Onigumo's verbal onslaught, the pair need something positive to hold into. I fancy the pace of Sesshomaru's and Kagome's relationship. You aren't rushing anything and it helps to build  a strong foundation as well as preserves the integrity of the story as for their characters. Thank you for your post on my wall!. I always enjoy giving you thorough reviews. I try to do so with every chapter. Another fantastic update. I shall patiently wait for more. 


elizabeth (Chapter 7) - Wed 01 Jul 2015

It gets more interesting as I keep reading. I hope to read the next capi. Regards.


No Uta (Chapter 6) - Fri 12 Jun 2015

Onigumo's character is sheer brilliance!  I cannot get enough of his multiple foul personalities. Each character has a tortured past that he seems to know when taking the form of one of his personalities. So, he's not aware of Kagome's presence - yet. He is aware of her grandfather. Oh I bet he knows something. You've introduced Shippo, face caked in rancid blood and all - outstanding! I'm loving the character development as well as the pace of the plot. I am looking forward to Sesshomaru's return. Poor Miroku has his hands full.


Elizabeth (Chapter 6) - Thu 11 Jun 2015

Yay i love quick updates! I hope Sesshomaru comes back soon, too!


StormieLikeWeather (Chapter 6) - Thu 11 Jun 2015

Very enjoyable and unique a story, I'm looking forward to reading more :), and that pesky Sesshomaru always leaving us guessing, I feel like I'm beginning to relate him to 'where in the world is Carmen Sandiego?' Lol.


Kae (Chapter 6) - Thu 11 Jun 2015

Ooh, I am highly intrigued! What secret is Kagome hiding? What really happened with Sango's family? What is Shippo's backstory and why is he covered in dried, rancid blood? Is Sesshoumaru coming back? If so, when? Did he buy the house next door? Also, who is that buried in the garden beneathe the berry bushes? Kagome said it was a child, did Sango and Miroku have a child only to lose it? Or is it Kohaku that is buried there? I really can't wait to find out! I hope you update soon, your story is so great! Thank you for sharing it!


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