Wow! Wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, and did I mention wow?

That was very good! Your descriptions were beautiful, yet simple, and they painted a wonderfully detailed picture at the same time.

This was also a very good exploration of human emotion - picturing a Kagome so broken by her sadness and anger that she can't quite put the pieces back together. I also liked Sesshoumaru's reaction - one often finds that the things we learn about  ourselves can be the most horrifying discoveries of all, even to the point where ignorance of ourselves, of our very being is preferable.

Very good. One short chapter, and you've said so much. Great usage of vocabulary and your spelling/grammar is impeccable.

Thank you for gifting us with such great work! I'm off to read your other stuff now:)

May you look forward to blessings and always have hope in your heart,

Siki

I am surprised you are leaving this as a one shot when this has so much potential to be more.

Oh, wow! That's... so... beautifully demented. That's a compliment from me, by the way. Great Work!

You weren't kidding when u said that Kagome would be OOC... and I kinda liked that twisted version of her that Sesshou saw. I wonder if he's as disturbed as I am about what was within her mind? I look forward to what you have in store for Kagome and Sesshou. Keep up the good work and update soon :P