Reviews for Opposite Reaction by Smittee

twiknham (Chapter 1) - Fri 27 Mar 2009

Smittee, this was really well written!  Your writing style has improved so very much in just the last few months, I'm very proud of you.  I enjoyed the short "mini-stories" within the whole.  It had good humor, light and appropriate, and overall it was extremely enjoyable.  Good job! -TK


Maddie (Chapter 1) - Thu 26 Mar 2009

LOL Sooooo funny great Job I loved it update soon. I keep laughing picturing Sesshomaru pregnant LOL


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 1) - Thu 26 Mar 2009
i kinda think you need to have a follow up story b/c thats just too hilarious!

Noacat (Chapter 1) - Thu 26 Mar 2009

This was  hilarious. Poor Sesshoumaru. *rofl*


naqaashi (Chapter 1) - Thu 26 Mar 2009
LOL...So you finally did it, you! Nice, but it could have been longer, you know....that would have given you a chance to....elaborate! Details on a pregnant Sesshoumaru peeing his pants cuz he cudn't waddle to the bathroom in time, gobbling down spinach and custard topped with pickled blueberries at 2:00 a.m., sobbing like a baby while watching chick-flicks cuz his estrogen's going bonkers, and giggling and blushing when he feels the baby kick - again, blame the estrogen, and begging kagome for sex because his testosterone needs some, and Kagome refusing because she's worried it might harm the babay.....endless possibilities there! Still, I liked it, especially the bit at the beginning, everyone's going to think it's Kagome on the table, and then - WHAM, BAM, SESSHOUMARU'S A WO-MAN! And a doctor groping between a very embarrassed Sesshoumaru's legs. Thanks for the mental image - now I need some calming potion or I'll never get off my laughing butt.

TamashaToko (Chapter 1) - Thu 26 Mar 2009
Hmmmm what to say about this fic? I don't think that type of silliness is my favorite brand, but you made it work. I like how you surprised the readers in the beginning by making look like Kagome would be the one giving birth as some of these stories usaully do start, then it turns out Kagome is helping, and then we discover the female really is Sesshoumaru. Poor bug went smashy smashy, lol. Another thing I did like about this really odd story was that even though you have Sesshoumaru being the pregnant one in pain being very grouchy there were no cliche jokes, which are often times normally associated with something like this. Too bad though...that the Dairy Queen commercial with the guy who was pregnant yelling at his wife because she did this to him kept flashing through my head the whole time taking me out of the story a bit. By this point why doesn't Rin have a better babysitter than Jaken? Why does Sessy so nice and warm to Kagome...but still manages to cause problems with people? Who knows... Anyway...dun dun dun...drum roll. This story earns...Miss. Smittee....two fan girl smilies... ^_^ ^_^

Nobody (Chapter 1) - Thu 26 Mar 2009

OH GOD SMITTEE! LMAO LMAO! I had to read it twice cause i couldnt believe you just did that. Then i read it again to really soak it in. Wonderfully creative as always. I kove it you talented scary woman you!!


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