The chapters are awfully short and some of the details are lacking but it is very well written. I like it, and I know this came too late but when you develop more as a writer I would suggest you revamp it in the future.
Kudos to you, you have my respect.
I love this story. It was awesome. I have read it twice now and it was even better then the first time I read it. Thanks for a great story.
I love this story. Great job it was wonderful.
reema (Chapter 13) - Sat 06 Jun 2009
| thats a veeerrrryyyyy nice story .. amazing !! .. especially when she recalled her memories from his bite !! .. nice
Nyuka (Chapter 13) - Fri 29 May 2009
| *sniff* *sniff*....that was so beautifuly...*clap hands* oncore oncore........I'm glade the only side affect the jewel had was transporting her to a random place with out a memeory.......wait that doesn't sound that great....but it all work out and I for one ame happy...XD.....Thank you so much for writing this beautifuly if not short...but still beautifuly story...thankyou.....I only wish for it to keep going...XD...................................Nyuka
Rabbit Fan (Chapter 9) - Wed 20 May 2009
This is pretty good!
(Your style sort of reminds me of another author I like to read, which might be influencing my opinion, but this is a compliment.)
Will you be updating soon now that you're out of school?
(Aerospace Engineering? How cool! The lady who does this site is one too! What a coincidence...)
| No need to apologize, this chapter was well worth the wait. I love Kagome's willingness to explore her lover, it made for a wonderful scene. As for Inuyasha, I can't wait to see his reaction. Keep up the wonderful work.
Diane (Chapter 8) - Sat 18 Apr 2009
I like it. Just as an FYI; waste = garbage or loosing something (waste of time), waist is the section of your body above your hips. What's odd is you have it both ways in 1 sentence, at the end of the 3rd paragraph from the top.
| Wow, that was some lemon! I loved it!
| I'm loving this story. Keep up the good work!
| Ah, your first time? Was it good for you cuz it was great for us! You did a wonderful job with your het love scene. I can't wait for more.
I do like this story, however this last chapter seemed familiar to me, have you posted this before, or on a different site perhaps?
I really enjoyed this story!! It was really well written, and i can't wait to read the next time chapter!!
| I like that you started with a little tease instead of jumping into a full lemon. I can just see Jaken and Rin standing there with mouths wide open.lol. Well, now that everyones alerted to her presence I can't wait to see whats next. Love it, post soon.
sasha 24 7 11 (Chapter 5) - Mon 06 Apr 2009
| that was great and you should keep it up. And I was wodering if you were planning on putting in a lemon. I thought you might cause this is a great set up so far for one plus I think that would make it more interesting.oh and also you should keep it going did I already mention that.Lol
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