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Please tell me ur going to update soon ur story is wonderful

ahhh i can't wait for the next chapter~!

The accident made me cry, you had me thinking you killed her for good then BAM! She's still alive. You had me hooked since the first chapter heck you had me hooked since the summary of this story. Can't wait for more chapters, keep up the good job! ~^.^~

I read this fanfic for the first time toay and I am already a fan of it. Hopefully you will update this fanfic soon, because it is very well written and liked.

Thank you for sharing.

Pleasssseeeee write more T.T

Please update? This has got to be one of the most angsty fanfiction on Dokuga(it's number one on my list right now), but I see that you haven't updated for a long time now. I would love to read more. ;(

please update. i miss this story so much.

.....................FINISH THIS PLEASE..............AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH*COUGHS* HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH..THANK YOU.

pffft that's about the only good thing that sango has done in this, though she still seems like she's going to cause trouble. I dunno if she'll end up preggers with sesskid, or if she and miro are divorced or just separated.

if i can make a suggestion, i say make sango preggy with Sesskid, and have her lose it. then she tries to come back to miroku not having heard about kagome being alive and such only to see that miroku's moved on completely and is now dating, SHIORI! *loves shiori/miroku pairings as a side and no one ever does them.

One thing though that bother's me is that kagome's family hasnt been involved with anything except a mention about her mother not coming to see her daughters dead body as confirmation. I'd like to see the backlash of kagome's mother being told she's live and her pretty much wailing on Sesshomaru.

WHO btw is still an asshat. :[

As for Kagome, i think it should be explained that her miko powers are keeping back most everything that happened so as not to stress her body, including memories, knowing it would be too strong for her to take. maybe after she's had her kid by a few months she starts remembering the bad first, then the good, but hasnt let Sess near the kid any time during all this.

With her no longer his mate he doesn't really have any say over what happens by his own mouth, so he cant go against her. then she gets involved with someone that maybe miroku sets her up with, a good guy, maybe an adult shippo, or a NICE GUY NARAKU! 0o0o0o0o0o no one does that, i love nice guy naraku! and things go well for them but kagome cant get over her love for sess, even if she hates him for it, dont do someone obvious, if your going to do it like Bank, Hojo or kouga, pick someone that's like out of the blue, like Houshimaru, (the moth guy) or 0o0o0o Kagewaki Hitomi! (naraku's human body - the sickly prince) someone that's strong and powerful but still a good guy.

obviously these are just things i'd love to see! but hopefully when you start updating this again we'll see them!

okay time to stalk you now!

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o.o i still dont feel bad for Sess, even through all that. he was planing on throwing her away, had even gotten ready to, and then cheated on her, while i want them together i want him to suffer for a while. Maybe kagome could end up with someone else for a bit, and that really EF sesshomaru up. maybe that ne person doesnt sleep with her but it gets close, and Sess is helpless to do anything.

O_O OMFG SAFFIEE!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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you've just joined the r0oview bomb club! congratz!

OMFG FIXIT!!!

O_O OMFG seriously this is nuts! now i want to know what the heck is going to happen! i'm so glad there's another chapter but let me tell you when i get to 7 i'm so gunna start stalking you!

pffffffffffffft Sess you deserve it!

OMFG saffiee TEARS!!! i really hate sesshomaru, and sango right now!

DAMNITSAFFIEE!!! >:l those hookers! I really dont like sango and sess right now!

:sniffle: it's so sad.

Can't wait to see what happens next! Great job so far <3

PLEASE UPDATE YOUR STORY

when are you updating this!!!!???? wow this is awsome! You have me on my toes waiting to see what happens!!! PLZ UPDATE!!!

Sorry for not reviewing before now, but I got so caught up in the story, I forgot. "ducks tomato" :D However, I have to tell you that I LOVE this story! It's definitely different. And, I love Touga! Poor guy. Trying to do what's best, but flubbing it majorly! Anyhoo, the story flows really well, and there's plenty of action and angst. Do hope you will update soon. Can't wait to see what happens next. So many questions left unanswered!

OMG SO FREAKING GOOD!!!!!! Please update with more chapters ASAP. I wish I had discovered this story when it was finished instead of now because it's killing me waiting for updates. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!

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