Reviews for His Name by MissMac

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DeathDagger (Chapter 2) - Tue 22 Nov 2016

I CANT BELIEVE YOU JUST ENDED IT RIGHT THERE!!! YOU CRUEL CRUEL PERSON!!!


Nicole (Chapter 2) - Mon 12 May 2014

Well, I was definitely not expecting that ending.


Amy (Chapter 2) - Sat 12 Jun 2010

WONDERFUL PLOT ,GORGEOUS BUILD UP,TOUCHDOWN.


Amy (Chapter 2) - Sat 12 Jun 2010

MORE UPDATES NEEDED TO EXPLAIN THE PLOT.I WOULD LIKE TO SEE WHERE THE PLOT GOES.


Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Mon 26 Oct 2009

Hahah loved it!


Ava 365 (Chapter 2) - Sun 25 Oct 2009

I loved it!!! Sesshomaru turned up to be a jerk, or probably he had good reasons to do what he did. So what happened to the baby? Did she lose it in the accident? No one ever told her that she had been pregnant? She asked her mother if she ever had sex, why didn't she tell her then? So many questions! So, how is Sesshomaru going to win her back? Perhaps she has more things to remember, like how he made her feel and how she felt. Has she recovered all her memories?


IrishBlackRosie (Chapter 2) - Sun 25 Oct 2009

Oh MissMac you very much need to continue, I will not send hate mail or any form of pitchfork fire and brim stone but I will request you please continue. Your work is tantilizing at the very least and memserizing (for lack of a better word) at the most. You paint lovely pictures with your story, without using much discription it is a beautiful ability you have and it would be a shame to not give us more. So please continue, well construed and a very very lovely plot too. :)


Ameire (Chapter 2) - Sat 24 Oct 2009

Please do. You can't end it there...well, you can, but....please?


Silverinumiko (Chapter 1) - Sat 21 Mar 2009
she said the wrong name he got to so crushed I think you should at least make another chapter to tie this all up and to where she gets her memories back anf remembers that his name is Sesshomaru. thanks.

Winters_Snow (Chapter 1) - Wed 04 Mar 2009

Wow. After all that I'm not gunna lie...I am pretty damn depressed that she said THAT name out of every name she could've said. Damn shame...


Kiyoe Lunet (Chapter 1) - Wed 04 Mar 2009
loved it, really did have its own original twist. i couldn't get past the fact that kags had called him NARAKU! my cuz was lmao and thinking wtf while i anime fell and had a sweatdrop plus was laughing so hard that i couldn't breath. so anyways that was great and one of my fav one-shots. P.S. my big bro thought that my cuz and i had finally lost it! O.o!

Saholia (Chapter 1) - Tue 03 Mar 2009

lmao! brilliant!


Sala (Chapter 1) - Tue 03 Mar 2009

Oh man.  That was *not* the name I was expecting. (I thought it would be Inuyasha) ^_^


Sirinya (Chapter 1) - Tue 03 Mar 2009
Thats cold.... Poor Sesshoumaru. 500 + years of waiting for her and she calls him Naraku. WTF XD

Talulabell (Chapter 1) - Tue 03 Mar 2009

Fuck...hahahah thats all i could think of when she said Naraku..Oh fuck haha i loved this it was beatfully written good job


swasdiva (Chapter 1) - Tue 03 Mar 2009

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BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!

I sincerely hope that was supposed to be comedic, because there has never been a more believable opportunity for Sesshoumaru to faceplant. Yowza, Kags! Oh SNAP, indeed!!!!! LOLOLOL!!!!

Your style is engaging, but as a friendly crit there could be some sharpening of word choice and flow, cutting down on repetition. Also, there's a bit of discrepancy with the plot: if Kagome can't remember the past 5 years, why is her mother bringing up the Sengoku Jidai? Wouldn't Kagome, having no memory of it, think her mom is a little bat-shit crazy? It may be better suited to have her mother hint at a strange past, but drop the subject when Kagome doesn't take the bait, so to speak. Perhaps include her remembering the word "Tetsusaiga" but be unclear where it comes from. It's just a little jarring that she can't remember anything and yet the idea of traveling back in time doesn't startle her.

I really liked her interaction with Sesshoumaru, though, and I found it interesting how you left the cause of her injuries up in the air. I was really attracted to their chemistry, and never expected the end!! It really smacked me upside the face, but it also makes me wonder, was Kagome gettin' a little sumthin' sumthin' from Naraku on the side??

 


InuYoukaiLiz (Chapter 1) - Tue 03 Mar 2009
OH SNAP I see violent head smacking in the future XD

luree (Chapter 1) - Tue 03 Mar 2009

OH SNAP!

 

Brilliant twist at the end.  I sincerely hope you continue this one to include Sess's reaction to her faux pas.


...forgotten... (Chapter 1) - Tue 03 Mar 2009

LOL.. Great read btw

kept lolling as i read...

after the heat filled moments...

enter Naraku.. WTF?!

LOL


wawa (Chapter 1) - Tue 03 Mar 2009
I thought a really sweet moment was coming up. Then suddenly Kagome says Naraku........can't wait to see Sesshoumaru's reaction.

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