(Chapter 1) - Wed 25 Feb 2009
Thanks, Diana. The word choice error has been fixed. Most helpful. No, this oneshot will not be continued. Sorry.

hikari hime (Chapter 1) - Mon 23 Feb 2009

lol

I've always loved Sess-mom as a character, and you write her awesomely (is that a word? O.O).

Hmmm... this was soooo good, it might call for a continuation, no? -pleading puppy eyes-

Dewa mata


Vampire_Bride (Chapter 1) - Mon 23 Feb 2009

you should continue this! its really funny and it would be interesting how things go.


Diane (Chapter 1) - Mon 23 Feb 2009

I really enjoyed this & thought Sess's mom was portrayed in a unique manner. Just in case you're interested you have a common word choice error in this, up near the top where Sess's mom says they're in her palace which was once the Inu no Taishos, you have wearier (weary - Physically or mentally fatigued) instead of wary/warier (marked by keen caution, cunning, and watchfulness especially in detecting and escaping danger). Hope this helps.


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