Oooooo. Likes Monti's new chappie. Likes new chappie a lot. *holds and pets Monti* Will love the next chappie, when you can and will write it. Must find out what this Tanuki plans to do, yes?

Very nice idea! Keep up the good work! xD Please make your chapters longer so as to prolong the niceness of the story as I read Lol. T___________T *sigh* all good things are just too short.....

Naughty Kagome made Sesshy-wesshy angry. Yes, she did...O.O Don't tell him I said that. O.Oo I don't wanna die just yet. Anyways, I REALLY like the smoke idea. It made that area, and the feelign around it come more to life for me. I started to feel heat, from the smoke, more like a steamy feel. Even though it was warm, I felt a shiver run up my spine, like there were eyes set upon me, as I followed kagome through the back alley, in her memory. I saw the boy, sealed and not able to communicate with anyone. Perhaps a slight breathing, and som sweat rolling down, being so close to the pipes.

.....Yeah...smittee's vivid imagination is working. *yells at lap top* Finish the dang defrag now! My muse is talking to youuuuu! It says NOOOW!!!  ...Anyways I cant' WAIT to read next chappie. I is definetly hooked on the drug that would be Monti's story. *nods*

*pets chinchi Monti* Goood monti. pREcious Monti. Smittee now has her Pipe Dreams fix. But, it isn't enough. Oh noes. *shakes head* nevers enough. You lefts it on a cliffy, taking the very last puff of heavens away from me. You mustn't do that- No, msut do that at all. Makes Smtitee impatient. Makes Smittee start writing stuff. *takes hand off Monti* Or, is that what you want....? By the way, Smittee did enjoys this. I wonders what will happen next. Yes, yes. Wonders greatly. is very happy on what you did with this story; yes, we are. *nods and puts you down, skulking away into the corner, to stare at Microsoft Word, talking to myself as I do*

Must make good chapter now. Yes, yes. don't wants to makes this intoxication with Pipe Dreams to make me crazy...er.

From the summary and the title I expected a little more out of this story.  It just seemed to lack a drive to it, unfortunately.  It's only three chapters, so perhaps I'm not seeing exactly where it's going.  Its got a slow start and nothing really climatic nor does it actually tell what the story's going to be about.  It's interesting, but it's just slightly difficult to stay interested.  I hope with the upcoming chapters they're a little more driven or attention-locking unlike the first chapters which seemed to be there but just not pulling you into the story.  It's a great story idea, and I hope that you will continue it.

I'll make you an offer you cannot refuse, Monti. O.O Me wants more. I \promise to be a good writer, and lessen my lazy! This was great!

O.O Ooo...Smittee wants to know what'll happen next! O.O

Awww...man, don't leave us hanging like this!!! I'm intrigued by the dreams and wondering why you've added the pipes....gunna be some freaky nasty stuff with them pipes M? *wink wink*

Update my naughty little huggable minx!!!

*Teensie steals you from fiance*

~Ts

Ha ha Heeheeee

Good good, me likes

^_^

what else do you want from me? Leave me alone! *Sobs* I said it was goooooooooood!

Ok, fine it's great!! Imma read some more. I love it ^_^

She had ADD gettin lost the way she did. (Asian Direction Disorder)

I luvers what you did with it! Yay! *huggles Monti*