Wow... the citrus actually caught me off guard... I totally loved the kiss and the spilling of beans, but when it started getting lemony I was shocked. Not that it wasn't well written or anything: on the contrary, it was very well written. Now I'm curious to see how this event shapes the events to come.
kedala (Chapter 52) - Mon 09 Feb 2009
OMG!!!
It's almost 1 AM and I should be asleep but just couldn't pass up a chance to read this. And oh what a read. Sesshomaru doing a 69!!! WTH!! That was the sexiest thing I have ever read. And so descriptive. Man, you leave a girl wanting. ....I'm gonna have to read this again tomorrow.
Alero (Chapter 52) - Mon 09 Feb 2009
Wow. I don't know what else to say. *fans self*
Megs (Chapter 52) - Sun 08 Feb 2009
FINALLY!!!!! *does a happy dance* That chapter was wonderful! I especially liked the argument they had. Now....when you had Sesshoumaru bite her shoulder...was he marking her as his mate? I can't wait for the next one!
Brights (Chapter 52) - Sun 08 Feb 2009
| OH. MY. GOD! That was awesome! You are a very great writer and I love this story! I was so sad when this chapter ended! *tear* I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the great work! You're awesome!
White Dire Wolf (Chapter 52) - Sun 08 Feb 2009
| I have to say this story has been the best I have read. I have followed it religiously since its beginning and each chapter brings new heights to the art and wonder of writing. Bravo! You are truely a master! I will keep your name as one of the best and will continue to follow your works for as long as you keep writing. WDW
::cricket:cricket:: ....... ........... Wow. That was AMAZING!!!
Ikaru (Chapter 52) - Sun 08 Feb 2009
*pant pant pant* OMG that was wonderful, i haven't read a lemon that good in forever......and u fit it so well into the story, i luv luv luv it!!! If this was ur first attempt i can't wait to see what you come up with when you are more seasoned!! Much Luv my dear, ur writing, as always, is full of awsomeness. I can't wait to see what u come up with next!!
absolutely wonderful, lady b! delicious and nutritious! Well, maybe not nutritious, but most definitely delicious!
Okay, I almost died reading this chapter!!! I was so scared as I was coming to the end, because there didn't seem to be enough chapter left!! I LOVED this update!! And not just the hot and heavy stuff! I really liked the argument that lead up to it! Great job, as usual! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Sala (Chapter 52) - Sun 08 Feb 2009
Fabulous chapter! *melts into a puddle of fangirl goo*
kedala (Chapter 51) - Wed 04 Feb 2009
| I've finally caught up. It took me a week, but it was definitely well worth it. I must say that I am still amazed by your attention to detail and ability to weave a story that remains consistent and exciting as it increases in length. Each chapter leaves me anxious to read what will happen next. And my poor, dear Sesshy...I'm very curious to see how you decide to heal his wounds and what role Kagome will have in soothing his ache.
I didn't think I'd be crying for the warlord by the end of this chapter. Amazing twist. I'm looking forward to the 'meeting of minds' between Kags and Sess over her need to achieve and his need to protect. You do a wonderful job of using dialogue.
Thank you for sharing,
Kyuthe
kedala (Chapter 36) - Mon 02 Feb 2009
| This is bloody brillant! I remember reading this story a long while ago, but for whatever reason, stopped. Now I'm back in the process of reading it again and trying to catch up. I am simply AMAZED at your abilities to tell and weave a story so perfectly that it becomes a picture ingrained in the mind of the readers. I really don't know what to say, but wow! And this chapter is just beautifully done.
| That was awesome. Yay, for Kagome for kicking some , and her dramatic talent.
Can't wait to see how Sesshoumaru reacts...though i forsee an earful.
So now that Kagome knows all this info. on Susanou, will he try to get her too?
I really liked this chapter because I wasn't sure what was to come once she got past the doors.
I love your style of writing and always get excited when a new chapter is posted!
| I've just started reading this story, and I have to say that you are a really good writer. This story is awesome. I would have to say that it is one of my favourite fanfics I have ever read and will keep reading as it develops. One tjing that has caught my attention. Is it intentional, or is there a certain reason that Kagome takes the place as small people in the story of Issunboshi and Momotaro?
Also, I love Shiro ! ! ! ! !
| Ah, I keep leaving you reviews on different sites!
Well, well, well... look who decided to join the party? I'm sure Sesshoumaru is going to be quite confused about all that happened. Will Kagome tell him? Or will he realize for himself that she has become strong enough to take care of herself? We're pretty much done with this tale, no? I'll miss Fe-San and Mon-Ki. But I really liked this chapter - at least, for once, someone actually asked for Kagome's help.
FL (Chapter 51) - Sun 01 Feb 2009
Man, I feel sorry for the "ogre" warlord. Good thing Sesshomaru was there to save Kagome... again. lol Very nice and I am eager for more. :D
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