I love this story, the plot is wonderfully written and the way you used the characters makes me believe that's how the anime went. However, the way you left the last chapter doesn't seem like an ending with a potential of a sequel. It seems like it is just a chapter with a humungous cliffhanger. In my pov, there's a difference. I'm not sure if you've noticed, but I felt that the story dwindled down a path away from the plot. The title is based on the plot, if I'm correct, and the way it was continued after Sesshoumaru won over Kagome, it seemed like a good time to end the story. I hope I'm not hurting your feelings, but I just have this feeling that it could be in three parts..Wrong Numbers, Games We Play, and the sequel sequel....
| thats it ohhh not cool now im confuzed i think i missed something what is she guilty about and what is she taking in the end? you cant leave it there thats sooo uncool.....i would settle for two chaps also please just a few more breadcrums for us....
| But the 38th wasn't the last chapter, right????
Please don't end the fic like that! There'll be at least 2 more chapters, right? At least a 39th and a 40th? OMG, I'm feeling rather lonely now!!!!
Dani (Chapter 37) - Sat 28 Feb 2009
| YAY! I knew they would get him. I just wish Sess could have ripped him to pieces while he was alive. Is this the end?
| Wow, definately did not see that coming! You keep us guessing, I love it!
| You go Kagome!!! Out a fire in their asses!!! I love this story so much!
| That was simply magnificent! Great beyond words!
Congrats!
Anggie (Chapter 37) - Sat 28 Feb 2009
| Well damn, I don't blame Yamomoto for killing himself, but I was kinda looking forward to him being tortured. Oh well at least now there will be a happy chapter next...right?
sunset in love (Chapter 37) - Fri 27 Feb 2009
| at last!!!! take that yamamoto, uh, honestly i'm getting mean! anyway, is this the end? please let them at least have a happy ending, poor Yuri, i would love to let yamamoto to fall down on the cliff, into aligators or shark infested water or fell onto snake hole... yeah, that still won't make up for the crime he committed against all, especially Yuri!
Now this is getting very intense! I wonder if Sesshou's daughter is able to interfere cuz she has the power to go back in time? I hope Yamamoto gets what he deserves... *Evil grin* I can only hope that Kagome has her turn at the guy who caused her miscarriage. Keep up the amazing work and update soon... :P
Lumiere (Chapter 36) - Fri 27 Feb 2009
that was very interesting......i was not expecting that.....
cant wait to see what Sesshou will do about Kagome's powers, there child and all that...
*kiss*hug*kiss*
Dani (Chapter 36) - Fri 27 Feb 2009
| WHAT! Don't do it? Sess you better kick his ass and then some. Maybe Kagome should do it-torture him. Make him pay for hurting my beloved. Well, I anxiously await to see what happens next.
Bell (Chapter 36) - Fri 27 Feb 2009
| OOOOO I love it, time for kagome to get her vengance!! Waiting anxiously for next chapter......
Wow, the action and suspense aspects of this story are excellent. I also love the way you introduced Kagome and Sesshomaru's daughter into the plot. I can't wait for more!
Do I keep saying this? This was the best chapter yet!
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