| Once again Jak (in the previous chapter) was pricelessly done. And I loved this line: "If it were him , he'd forgive him without a doubt. Of course , he could be considered bias though." Brought a smile and a laugh to my face. Thank you! And this part: " You really need to attend anger management classes. Really." she replied. What to do when caught acting infantile? Become indifferent." OMG, what a perfect ending for this chapter!!! I'm feeling for Sesshoumaru, though. Poor guy. What else was he to think when she took off like that? I'd through a fit, too.
beautiful!
my heart had hurt for sesshomaru when she left him! it was so well written, i almost cry for him. *blush*
keep the good work and update really really soon!!!
| yasha told sesshomaru...i like the way he said i can just imagine the scene and how his face looked too...lolz but please update soon
Brilliantly Funny. You've made my morning.. This started so sultry, and now, I just want to read more and more. Please update soon.
Jazmin (Chapter 13) - Wed 28 Jan 2009
| forgot to say this in my last review, but i liked the whole twist in your story. She called the wrong number, i should've known by the title but i didn't. anyway, it was great. i'd like to read your other fanfic sometime.
Jazmin (Chapter 12) - Wed 28 Jan 2009
| i loved this chapter, the "oh no you didn't.." line was hillarious. keep up the great work
Selene (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 Jan 2009
| Oh my goodness... I love this story!! It is wonderful, and I fully encourage you to continue ^-^. (Obviously do it at your own pace though). It is a wonderful story, just one little thing, watch your grammer, and you tenses (sometimes you make some errors) however on the whole great job! Have a lovely day :-)
Yay.. I love this... and I love your protrayal of Jakotsu.
wawa (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 Jan 2009
| I love this story. I like how Sesshoumaru was not the intended receiver of the phone calls, and what hot phone calls they were! See you next time!
Erica (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 Jan 2009
| OMFG!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!! I WANT SESS AND KAGS TO MAKE UP!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOL I love the cat fight chapter!! Especially since Jak is in it : ) And I can't believe they all fought for Sesshoumaru!! I'm definitely waiting for your next updates : )
Ha Ha Ha! It was great! I loved Jak! I loved Sess! I can just picture both of them, very vivid word pictures! I loved the catfight! Can you even imagine what would happen if a roomful of women were bidding on Sess? Oh, yeah, just what happened in this chapter! And of course, Jak would get in the middle of it. That rocked!
We had "E" on television at work all day, interviews with VIPs about their gowns and jewels, and also several hours of "Worst Celebrity Oops", then I come home, boot up the computer, and get to read this! Outrageous! You could get a job writing for the tabloids! Your celebs were fabulous, dahling!!!
| LMAO. the way the chapter ended... wow. and poor Sesshoumaru; no one ended up buying his company. xD
| Hahahahahaha!!!!! That had to have been the funniest thing I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I can't believe that they actually fought over Sesshomaru. I mean it's one thing to have verbal confrontation, but to actually get physical, now that's just wrong. And Jak, there are no words to express my glee. It is always a joy to read anything that has Jak in it.
Lena (Chapter 12) - Tue 27 Jan 2009
| WOOHOO go Jakotsu!!! I love this story I could read it over and over again. I cannot wait for the next chapter to come out. To be perfectly honest when I read the summary I was not all that interested, but I said to myself you let me read this and I am SOOO glad I read it. I just LOVE IT! Sesshomaru putting himself in the auction, of course there is going to be a fight. But if it was me I would DEFINITELY win that fight. Lol anyway I hope all goes well for you and I await you next update, until next time.
slycats (Chapter 12) - Tue 27 Jan 2009
| just wanted to say hi! and tell you how much I am enjoying the story. It is a different take on the Sess/kags pairing that keeps it interesting. Not to mention the lemons!
I check for updates all the time and you never disappoint! Love the newest chapter. Only Sesshomaru could get them all bitch fighting..LOL.
Thanks for a great story.
| Okay, so I FINALLY got internet for my apartment today and had to catch up on the last three chapters. Oh my God, LMAO. That is SOOO FREAKING HILIARIOUS! I LOVE YOU! LOL.
Possessed (Chapter 12) - Tue 27 Jan 2009
LMAO!!! This did not disappoint! To freakin' funny! The visuals of Jak getting into a b*tch fight, Sess 'workin' it' and Kagome's mouth hanging open... just hilarious! Must rest abs now...
Hahaha, Poor Sesshy. I couldn't stop laughing. I knew something like this would happen, and Jakotsu was hilarious. At least Kagome got jealous. ^^
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