It is so true how dads can feel left out and just want to jump in there with their boys and do the silliest things, lol.
That was very cute "I wonder what fire tastes like" haha.
Tataru (Chapter 2) - Tue 13 Jan 2009
hahaha! Oh my! I can just imagine WHAT was going on in that room! I see some serious redecorating in the IMMEDIATE future!
Possessed (Chapter 2) - Tue 13 Jan 2009
LOLOLOL! I DO NOT want to know what Inuyasha was doing with the comforter or all the feathers! I don't even want to know if he was alone or not! This is priceless, and poor Rin is scarred for life... Karma for feathers! Nicely done!
Nobody (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 Jan 2009
This was so cute i love it. Too funny and great. Wonderful challenge fic! I encourage you to write more so i can read more! Great job!
| you never argue with a childs logic but this one stumpped me. thought the fic was funny though
LC Rose (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Jan 2009
| Do I have your permission to use that rooster line when my kids ask which came first? LOL! Freakin' great. The minds of children are a fantastic playground.
Nefret (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Jan 2009
I love it! And props for it being your first bit of writing since high-school. :D I love Rin's solution, and Sesshoumaru's confusion -- you've got characterisation spot-on.
Thanks for sharing! A great challenge response.
| Ahahahaha! That was lovely! Just lovely! xD
Possessed (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Jan 2009
This was awesome! Way too cute! The characterizations were done so well, the dialogue was right on... all in all, very nice! I will be sure to give you two Karma points, one for the rooster, one for landing on 500 words!
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